Cran-Raspberry
by GeneralE

Comment by neophyte:
Nice texture. there's potential here

Cooperation
by GeneralE

Comment by DJWoodward:
The blurred blue band on the bottom is a little distracting.

Cooperation
by GeneralE

Comment by mist:
A colourful image, it would have been nice to clearly see one of their faces.

Cooperation
by GeneralE

Comment by heathen:
if we could see what they were doing, perhaps the title would hold more meaning

Cooperation
by GeneralE

Comment by love:
It would be great to see what they are doing..

Hot New Card Reader Hits Market
by GeneralE

Comment by Toadie:
Toasted Compact flash for more saturated colors.
Good concept. The chrome would look better w/o smudges

Hot New Card Reader Hits Market
by GeneralE

Comment by _DaveA_:
Nice. Neat title and idea. Where did you get either 1) that giant card or.. 2) that tiny toaster? ;-)

Three ideas: 1) Open up the DOF so the handles, cord and 3 waves "logo" are all sharper. If that's our new reader, don't you want all of in focus? 2) Throw a little more soft light on the front of the toaster, it's a bit dark and detail is lost there. That would give you some more DOF. 3) Try a little Brasso on the new reader before the shot. It may be beyond polishing up, but if it did pick up some more shine, I don't think it would look bad. It would definitely give it a "newer" look to go with your title.

Where Are The Penguins?
by GeneralE

Comment by kundimansabuwan:
i wish you applied the rule thirds in this. hehehe! joke! don't be discouraged... there's always next time.

Message edited by author 2006-10-02 11:13:21.

Hot New Card Reader Hits Market
by GeneralE

Comment by Loki:
I have that same card reader! Nice composition.

Here Comes The Sun
by GeneralE

Comment by pcody:
I can't figure out if that is rain in the sun streaks or if it's just grainy from excessive dodging. That's the only place it seems to have that texture. I think it is way overexposed and if anything, most of the right side should have had some burning done if that was allowed in a basic editing challenge at all.