Sword-Killer
by GeneralE

Comment by james_so:
I think I get where your going with this one but I'm not feeling the disassembled thing here.

Sword-Killer
by GeneralE

Comment by expatdawn:
Just having a little tip of the sword on the left isn't working for me. I wish that whole space was empty. Am also struggling to see how this is disassembled.

Sword-Killer
by GeneralE

Comment by mikencon:
Where's the disassembly? Otherwise nice.

Sword-Killer
by GeneralE

Comment by jamesgoss:
I'm not sure I get a strong relationship to the topic. I think you're trying to touch it on a purely conceptual level, so I won't ding you down too much. As far as the shot goes, the most prominent feature is the date, and not the tip of the feather pen (as I suspect it should be). Some sharper DOF might help. I think if you were to crop this to remove the knife (sword reference), it would still hold the same power, but be more formally beautiful.

Cutting Corners
by GeneralE

Comment by bassbone:
the lighting seems harsh and i don't quite understand the choice of b/w

High-Voltage Moonrise
by GeneralE

Comment by PennyStreet:
I found this better than the average joe.... great thinking!

Blue on Blue
by GeneralE

Comment by MaryO:
I don't mind the motion blur in the wings but I wish the head was sharper and showed some detail. It looks very dark on my screen.

Cutting Corners
by GeneralE

Comment by muur88:
i like that i recognized that the 13 was one of the 13 balls. I'm not so sure i like vibrant colors forced into black and white, though someone else black and whited their strawberries, so perhaps I don't know what I'm talking about.

Cutting Corners
by GeneralE

Comment by Bill666:
Would have been nice to have seen the colours in this shot. Also, you could have removed the spots as it is an advanced editing challenge.

High-Voltage Moonrise
by GeneralE

Comment by Tom:
nice idea!