Thin Ice
by GeneralE

Comment by focus:
You capture a great deal of detail in this picture. That unfortunately, does not lend itself to a point of reference. Without the title, I was unable to determine what I was looking at. Even with the title, I don't know what my eye is supposed to be drawn to. Another angle may also have helped you eliminate the glare. I hope this feedback is helpful. Please forgive me if I hurt you. Please continue shooting.

Thin Ice
by GeneralE

Comment by Jak:
I'm sorry, but I understand this neither in terms of the challenge nor more generally. I just don't get it. 2 Jak

Thin Ice
by GeneralE

Comment by 4david:
what is the size/location? not clear what/where

Thin Ice
by GeneralE

Comment by Journey:
I'm not getting what's new about this but that's probably me. I see a few nice things happening here but all in all this does not grab me.

Grandpa Ben's Books
by GeneralE

Comment by 4david:
yes, the books are old. british orations, russian english dictionary, what's the story?

Grandpa Ben's Books
by GeneralE

Comment by RLS:
I like old books ... RLS

Grandpa Ben's Books
by GeneralE

Comment by mjcecil:
Could be a better photo without the open books. Still the subject is well executed.

Grandpa Ben's Books
by GeneralE

Comment by jimmsp:
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject.
Composition - quite good
Technical Aspects - quite good
Meets Challenge - yes
Visual Impact / Originality - good

Grandpa Ben's Books
by GeneralE

Comment by jmsetzler:
This is a nice choice of subjects for this challenge... I believe this image needs a little more sharpness overall... Possibly a lower camera angle as well... :) - jmsetzler

Grandpa Ben's Books
by GeneralE

Comment by jsabbarton:
Technically great, fits the challange...