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| 09/16/2002 05:50:00 PM |
After Curfewby GeneralEComment by HBunch: I looked for the subject, and concluded that it was the emply play area. That leaves the rest of the photo (the sky) to be the neg. space. However, if I look at it that way, then it's pretty boring. I then thought that you might have tried to convey negative space of the photo with negative space of the UNUSED play area. Unfortunately, I don't think they are the same, however, I wont count it against you for 2 reasons...1 not everyone went to college for art. and 2, this does portray a form of negative or "unused" space. so there...challenge met. lol. On to the photo. The lighting is great. I like the shadow of the tether ball in the front. The circles and lines make for nice patterns, and the sky is very nice. the angle and framing are excelent, and the focus and clarity are also very nice. Overall good photo! Good luck in the challenge. ~hbunch7187~ |
| 09/16/2002 05:25:00 PM |
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| 09/16/2002 05:13:00 PM |
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| 09/16/2002 04:27:00 PM |
After Curfewby GeneralEComment by Gracious: Meets the challenge but could be improved imo. The horizon splits the image in half and could be better using the 3rds princple. Good luck in the challenge...it's a tough one! Grayce aka Gracious |
| 09/16/2002 11:02:00 AM |
After Curfewby GeneralEComment by bobgaither: you have everything line up right--like the white lines--i know your title--like to have seen it lighter |
| 09/16/2002 10:38:00 AM |
After Curfewby GeneralEComment by justine: Trash or something on the right is distracting! I like this shot very much but can't give it higher then a 6. Justine. |
| 09/16/2002 08:24:00 AM |
After Curfewby GeneralEComment by mjcecil: I love this photo. The Tetherballs all in a row is wonderful, and use of extended exposure makes for some really nice coloration. One of my favorites this challenge. |
| 09/16/2002 02:37:00 AM |
After Curfewby GeneralEComment by undieyatch: nice spooky TRON (the movie) kind of environment........ works with the natural horizon line in a wierd way, but not that graphicly strong |
| 09/16/2002 02:05:00 AM |
After Curfewby GeneralEComment by sulamk: Composition: Space a bit too busy , I think that I would have cropped to just the center 5 Lighting: good and DOF good 6 , Appeal: 4 , Total Rating 5 Sulamk |
| 09/15/2002 08:12:00 AM |
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