Male Stripperby
GeneralEComment by RiderGal: Talya's critique (Critique club on break)
I understood this photo right from the beginning, even without the title, you could understand what your job was. I'm not sure why you placed where you did, you should have placed better.
composition - I think it's pretty good composition. good use of the rule of thirds and also good use of lines leading to your hand. Nice job on this.
exposure - this must have been really tough. with the bright background you did a fairly good job of getting your hand in there. Wish you could see it a little more clearly but it's understandable why it had to be this way.
Lighting - with the exception of the hand the rest is very well done. Nice job! no hotspots and very equally lit.
focus - perfect, no complaints here. I love the way you can read the whole thing. Excellent job.
fits the challenge - perfect. Excellent job with putting in the human aspect to really show what was happening here. I think it was very understandable what you were trying to do.
overall - i think this was a fairly good picture, it loses maybe a point or two for not being an extremely interesting photo, but the title helps with that. Overall I gave it a 7 very good job!
-Talya