Frisbee
by GeneralE

Comment by photom:
Nice capture of the frisbee action. You do need to get closer to your subject.

G4
by GeneralE

Comment by dsidwell:
Some interesting patterns here. I'm afraid there's not much for me, personally, to grasp on to, so I'm having a hard time understanding it. Your major clues are mostly wires and a few soft focused lights, and it's not adding up to anything in my brain. Some suggestions might be to select a different angle to your communication is more clear. Lighting for a specific mood might also help. Or try getting your focus on one or two things that will really help you communicate what you want. My attention is on the ball of light up center. Then my eye goes to the telephone cord down left becaus it is most in focus. They then move up to the greenish double-lights at right. So this progression isn't giving me enough data to form meaning. I hope this helps. Keep shooting!

Old No. 11
by GeneralE

Comment by dartompkins:
Good idea, but he crop seems a bit tight. I think If I were going to get this tight a shot of the train, I would have been trying to get a photo of the front straight on with the smoke rising from the top. That may not have been possible, of course, but that is where my mind goes with your idea. 7.

G4
by GeneralE

Comment by behindthescenes:
I dont get it. It doesn't explain itself and it's not very visually appealing.

Frisbee
by GeneralE

Comment by kiwinick:
not a bad shot but my thoughts are you need to get close to the action

Old No. 11
by GeneralE

Comment by slonko:
nice composition and colours
good luck in the challenge

Frisbee
by GeneralE

Comment by Curious:
I think the composition really works well as it gives a real sense of the action as well as a sense of the environment that the game is being played in. I can almost feel the grass under my feet. :) The light people work well against the shadows of the trees. The shadows in the foreground add interest and depth to the scene as does the light on the upper sections of the leaves. The more I look at it the more dynamic it looks. I think the motion blur is good as it adds to the energy. The only thing I could pick on is a bit of over exposure on the really bright elements in the shot. This image could also work really well if it was cropped fairly close to the top and bottom of the people. Good Luck.

Old No. 11
by GeneralE

Comment by Ecce_Signum:
I don't get to see trains like that in the UK, nice shot, would like to see a little more smoke but meets the challenge well. Tthe foreground seems a little blown to me.

Frisbee
by GeneralE

Comment by t_korecki:
nice idea though its unfortunate that all the players are out of focus but nice try anyway :)

G4
by GeneralE

Comment by alanfreed:
Um... ya lost me here. Not sure what I'm looking at, and I'm afraid the border isn't helping... :(