Zuni Butterfly
by GeneralE

Comment by GeneralE:

Originally posted by snackwells: I like the lighting here but it has a pinkish cast to it which may actually reflect the true color of this piece, but appears somewhat odd. I think this works very well for an advertisement. 7

Thanks for this and all the other comments. This is probably another case of my red-green color-blindness showing up ... I just don't notice things like a "pinkish cast" in many cases.

I must have an extra space character in the lower type, because it was a centered block according to Photoshop; I guess it could have been a little smaller, but I hate ads which make you get out a magnifying glass to read the phone number or whatever.

Zuni Butterfly
by GeneralE

Comment by sbeaumont:
bumping up....I like this much more second time around

The Final Piece of ...
by GeneralE

Comment by Joey Lawrence:
Very good idea, however it just seems that the whole picture itself is the poster. Maybe if you included a better angle and some drama like a hand picking up the piece, it would have been a higher scoring picture

Zuni Butterfly
by GeneralE

Comment by kiwinick:
great design and eye catching works well 8

The Final Piece of ...
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Comment by lemondster:
VERY nice concept and good overall picture. but i will offer my comments and ideas:
i think that the lower left of the picture is somewhat overexposed and lets me know exactly where your light source was =) another part of the photo that i may improve on is the overall composure of the shot. part of the challange states that the subject (the final piece) must be the strong point of the picture. in the case of this photo (as well as many others in this challange) my eyes feel distracted and lose concentration on the subject. to fix this i may have tried this shot in B&W, or held the camera closer to the puzzle piece and used a shallow DOF and had the rest of the puzzle in the background.

just my opinion though GL......7

The Final Piece of ...
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Comment by shareinnc:
The idea is a good one, but the puzzle is so busy it took me a full minute to figure out where the last piece was going to go.

Zuni Butterfly
by GeneralE

Comment by Catherine_B:
Background is too harsh for this very detailed piece of jewelry

Zuni Butterfly
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Comment by rebelgirl:
interesting piece of jewelry. I had problems getting my white perfect. GL

Zuni Butterfly
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Comment by LadeeM:
Simple and basic ... good job.

The Final Piece of ...
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Comment by woohoopepper:
I see where you're coming from, but I think this is a little too "busy."