Another Hi Riseby
LeoComment by boyd2000: Greetings from the Critique Club
Congratulations on getting your second best score and by beating your estimate by a quite a bit.
I think you did well on your composition, though it's just a bit crowded on top of the crane and if possible it might have been nice to see the lower part of the buildings.
The completed buildings frame the under construction building well. Your title emphasizes that as well as maybe giving an unfortunate inevitability of progress feeling, but I might be reading too much into it.
As you and another said the sky is pretty blown out. I get the same white skies too often and I haven't figured out the best cure for it. Maybe underexposing it all or exposing for the sky, but then the subject would be underexposed. I think you did the best you could with Basic Editing.
I like the geometric patterns shown in the picture; the horizontal layers of the building under construction, the lines of the crane and the checkerboard pattern of the windows in the completed buildings. The orange on the left side of the building blends well with the orange of the crane and top of the building and nicely offsets the monotone gray of the rest of the shot.
As you said, it would be more interesting with people working on the building. With that not a possibility maybe pulling back some more and getting more of the building and the surrounding buildings would be good.
Overall you did pretty well on this, and a few small improvements may have helped you get a better score.