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Comment by Dibutil:
Nothing to add to previous comments.
The expression of the eyes and missing mouth makes one woder: is he smiling or pouting?
May be a little softer details...

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Comment by olnos:
I really like this one!

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Comment by rickhd13:
I like the crop of this and the colors are nice...but the shirt behind him is very distracting

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Comment by ccraft:
I really like the expression on the face. I feel like I"m hanging out with this person just by looking at the photo. I love the composition and how you seem to have captured a candid shot. Good luck!

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Comment by drydoc:
Great shot. The background is a little too busy and distracting though.

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Comment by justine:
Nice green eyes. Background is a mess, maybe a tighter crop and a bit more focus.

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Comment by hughletheren:
Another letterbox aspect ratio - not sure about that. Interesting horizontal bar of light, emphasising hand and eyes. Think I might have tried to move the checked materail (curtain?) which distracts slightly.

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Comment by KevinRiggs:
Soft focus and grainy texture that doesn't seem to add to the composition. I like the catchlights but the seem to give away some motion. Was there any movement you had to compensate for or is that just the physical design of the light sources? The skintones are not consistent throughout but that probably has more to do with the uneven lighting that you caught on the face.

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Comment by Shelley:
I like the reflection of the blinds in his eyes

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Comment by StevePax:
Great idea, good composition, the lighting is leaving me with something missing.