Black Heat
by BAMartin

Comment by Silver Fox:
Meets the Challenge.
Pretty simple presentation.
Color on the bottles is nice.
Focus is right on.
Lighting works great.

Black Heat
by BAMartin

Comment by clues56:
Why not show the entire bottles? Good idea, and colorful

Walkway Over the Railroad 1928
by BAMartin

Comment by briphoto:
Would have liked to see just a little more space at the top. Nice shot.

Walkway Over the Railroad 1928
by BAMartin

Comment by Dustin:
good job. nice photo.

Walkway Over the Railroad 1928
by BAMartin

Comment by mcrochip:
Nice clear photo under the bridge.

Walkway Over the Railroad 1928
by BAMartin

Comment by UberFish:
I think a verticle framing would be better to cut out the trees on the side.

Walkway Over the Railroad 1928
by BAMartin

Comment by p_johns:
The bridge itself is pretty ordinary, but I've always loved

Walkway Over the Railroad 1928
by BAMartin

Comment by Silver Fox:
Wow, what a busy scene you've captured. I almost wish there was an engine rushing towards me. . . You've got a lot of detail on those rails and ties, the road sign, the sign on the bridge, the grease on the tracks. You've got good gray tones too. Nice photograph.

Walkway Over the Railroad 1928
by BAMartin

Comment by jmsetzler:
I like the lines in this photo.. the walkway bridge looks interesting as well, but I think it's framed just a tiny bit too close to the top of the frame... maybe a little extra breathing room up there would be nice also.. nice work :) - setzler

Silo
by BAMartin

Comment by tcherring:
CRITIQUE CLUB

Challenge: Meets the challenge, but the line is a little detracting, like it ends before it reaches the barn. It's a great landscape picture!

Technique: I can see you went to the end of the line which was good, but I think if you would have crouched down and focused on the line instead of the barn, it would have been more impactful, while giving more attention to the line. I would be curious how this picture looks in a sepia tone. I think the colors, etc would make some great sepia hues.

Overall: A great job, and you followed the challenge rules well. There is a little noise to clear up, but that's easy to do "post-challenge". I would be curious how this would look at a lower angle.
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