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| 12/10/2004 12:26:21 PM |
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| 12/10/2004 11:48:07 AM |
Tovrea Castle, Phoenixby BAMartinComment by autool: Composition: 6, Building and cactus on opposite sides of frame. This is distracting to me.
Technical: 6, Main subject is softer than foreground cactus. Use shorter depth of field.
Appeal: 5, Doesn't really keep my interest.
Challenge: 7, Weak due to composition.
Overall Calculated Average Score: 6 |
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| 12/09/2004 09:48:47 PM |
Walkerby BAMartinComment by rmtm333: great composition and love the colour (yes I am canadian, "...our"). Seems to be out of focus which may have been your intent. With a crisp image I would have probably given at least a 7. Nice shot. |
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| 12/09/2004 12:05:38 AM |
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| 12/08/2004 07:03:30 PM |
Tovrea Castle, Phoenixby BAMartinComment by e301: Ooh but there's some weird artefactness going down here. It seems to be straight-out-of-camera aspect ratio, so I'm fairly confident in suggesting your post-rocessing is letting you down a fair bit.
Aside from which (and I expect most people will only have commented on the blocky sky), I think you have the beginnings of a good shot here - but only the beginning, I'm afraid: I like the idea of including some foreground interest, in that wall and cactus, but you seem to have had to stretch things to include them and thus relegated the interest in your main subject too much - that cactus is almost as strong a presence as the castle, and that surely isn't what you intended. But you have at least not presented a head on boring shot just of the castle, so points for that. Is it worth my suggesting you have a look round and see how other similar compsitions have been worked? |
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| 12/08/2004 03:39:12 PM |
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| 12/08/2004 07:20:35 AM |
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| 12/08/2004 12:39:39 AM |
Walkerby BAMartinComment by whagerbaumer: Very nice road, and autumn leaves. I like how my eye follows the path into a sunnier place.
A 9 |
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| 12/07/2004 11:49:35 AM |
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| 12/07/2004 06:59:14 AM |
Tovrea Castle, Phoenixby BAMartinComment by Bud: NIce photo, there is a some artifacting in the sky. It would be nice to get a clearer shot without the bushes screeneing the building. |
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