I must not answer back to the teacher in class....
by PaulMdx

Comment:
Great idea for repetition. Shame that the pressure on the pen adds an unattractive yellow colouring to the model's hand. I'd have done the shot while holding the pen lightly. 6

Smiling Jack
by npage

Comment:
The light here doesn't work too well, the shadows really detract from the shot. Not sure about your composition. 4

Design Differences
by FranziskaLang

Comment:
Very nice textures, lighting and tones. Composition doesn't do much for me though. 7

gutter
by timboydwhite

Comment:
Too symmetrical for my taste. Interesting textures though. 6

Mercy of the Season
by jimmythefish

Comment:
Very nice effect, great light and textures. I'd be interested to know if Gaussian Blur was applied here. Great dof, very artistic. The composition doesn't quite work for me though, the 2 main places where your eye wants to rest are not comfortable... especially right at the top of the frame. 8

Three steps To Ribbon Heaven (try, try, try again, 247 submissions?)
by hughletheren

Comment:
Great idea! Nicely set up, the flowers look great. Very effective background, your lighting is great, those angels don't look easy to light well. Angels aren't entirely to my taste though, so score: 8

Repetition
by mgkarimi

Comment:
I have nothing against abstracts, but I can't see what this one is trying to achieve. 4

Pattern repetition
by justine

Comment:
Composition needs more to hold my interest. Not really sure what the shot is trying to achieve. 5

Fashion line up
by Anastasia

Comment:
Great idea, shame the shadows are so deep in the eye sockets though. Great composition. Works well in b&w. 7

Whose Apprentice
by barahoo

Comment:
Fantastic idea, I presume this was done with mirrors. 10 out of 10 for creativity. However, you have badly blown out highlights and a very unappealing colour cast. Nothing is very sharp. Depth of field is too shallow. The title is spelt wrong (it's all part of the package!). I'd love to see this shot again when you've developed your technique. 6