Dave Patterson Live
by timfythetoo

Comment:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Nicely shot.

Compositionally, I like your use of negative space and how the guitarist and text balance each other.

Technically, I like the colors and textures in this shot. I really, really like the concrete wall. For some reason, that really gives it an edge that would be lost with a typical photography background. The lighting is what I think is the strongest, though. It is dramatic without be overly so, or too harsh. The shadow is very effective as well.

So, I'm studying it to see what I could possibly suggest to get a higher score, and *wow* -- he's barefooted. That is cool.

I honestly don't know what I could suggest for improving this. I can only suspect that the one comment below that gave you a three for not having a "band" is the mindset of the other lower votes. I dunno. It never struck me that "David Patterson - -Live" couldn't be a band. But, then, I am just weird, I guess.

Nice work.

Karma

West Coast
by seebrown

Comment:
Good perspective and nice sky.

Saltwater Desaturation
by pipersd

Comment:
Nice blues. Good composition

FLOWERING POWER
by whitewolf

Comment:
The edginess of your post processing and the delicacy of your subject don't correspond well, to me.

The Sound of Silence
by Jas

Comment:
interesting subject, good composition

All Mine !!!
by Monique64

Comment:
That's cool. Good expressive face.

At the park
by loseme

Comment:
cute idea. the size of the trees really make the child and balloons seem smaller

My profile
by birkin

Comment:
Good detail. There is a halo around the subject -- maybe from a selection or usm. Doesn't "bother" me (ie--doesn't effect the score), but I know with a variety of monitors it may/may not be visible to you.

Classic
by -Bec-

Comment:
Nice clean bw. The red really adds to the shot.

Art of the Weld
by LaMas

Comment:
interesting capture.