time
by ritaard

Comment:
Unfortunately, I don't understand your intention with this photo... - setzler

Protest!
by hardwaybets

Comment:
interesting photo... something seems a bit strange about the esxposure here... I also think the contrast is a bit high... - setzler

Exclusive! Fluffy Gang escapes!
by miss parker

Comment:
This is an interesting shot but i think it's vey weak as photojournalism. In the world of photojournalism, you rarely see contrived images... - setzler

Do we care?
by sahko

Comment:
veyr nice shot... i like the choice of black and white on this one... - setzler

Road Kill
by tito79_98

Comment:
this photo has a good 'journalistic' quality for sure... I think a little higher angle with a little more light on the bloody face would be good too :) - Please help us enhance this site that we all enjoy by commenting on photos each week. The photographers really appreciate it :) - setzler

It's 11pm, Do You Know Where Your Kids Are?
by f0rce

Comment:
This is an interesting photo and I like the angle of the lighting as well. I'm not sure that I understand the intention though... - setzler

Homeboy Brings Jobs
by Gotcha

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

I think your photo is a good photojournalism shot... I have read through your comments here and I do see several that recant the rules about photographing art... however, in this instance, 'art' is your journalistic subject. I can definitely see this photo appearing on the cover of a local newspaper to show it off...

Composition:

I think you did a reasonably good job with the composition. Maybe a little angle would have added some impact, but I don't know what is visible here to the right or left of this mural... it could look like crap from any other angle :)

Technical:

The colors seem a little flat. The sunlight could have played a role in this.. I'm not sure if there was a way to make the colors punch harder here or not...

My Opinion:

I gave this photo a 6... slightly above average shot... I do agree with some of the previous comments about having some 'human element' in the photo. I think it could have added a higher impact as a photojournalistic shot.. especially if a few people were standing in the scene simply looking at the artwork....

John Setzler

Gilbert Days Parade
by rcrawford

Comment:
Excellent shot... I think you did a great job of photographing this parade... I also particularly like the shadow being cast here... including the people on the left edge of the frame makes this image even stronger... very nice work :) BTW- please help support this site by commenting on photos. The photographers really appreciate it! if you already comment on photos, comment on some extra ones :) - setzler

I Made the Cover! (Literally)
by amonteforte

Comment:
interesting :) Good work with the concept :) - setzler

Aliens Invade Amish Country,Take Over Cheese Operation
by klbfrisbee

Comment:
cute photo :) - setzler