Kernals
by Gracious

Comment:
excellent shot... this could appear as an advertisement I believe :) The diagonal orientation works well here :) - setzler

Into the Golden
by Antithesis

Comment:
this is a beautiful image... I believe the 'rhythm' may be a little weak.. the repeating patterns are a little 'chaotic' for me... - setzler

Silver Star
by 3boyzMom

Comment:
Nice angle for this shot... I"m not sure abou the lighting... the candle looks good but the rest is a little flat... - setzler

ChinaTown
by BAMartin

Comment:
The shadows seem to make a decent rhythm in this shot along with the red verticals... good work :) - setzler

Rhythmical Pawns
by arnit

Comment:
very nice work with the shallow depth of field... It looks like they ar floating in space :) - setzler

Repitition in form
by Natasha

Comment:
Excellent work.. this is one of the most unique interpretations of this challenge I have seen :) - setzler

Look for a bootblack
by bcncrazy

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Unfortunately, I don't know what a 'bootblack' is. Maybe it's a cultural difference between us. As far as interpreting the challenge, I think your image probably suffered because of it. Maybe the 'waldo' concept is primarily an American children's theme.

Other than being a difficult interpretation of the challenge, the image lacks a bit of sharpness.

I hope you have better luck next time :)

John Setzler

Rhythmic Steps
by sher

Comment:
interesting shot :) the rhythm of the steps is good and the sharp contrast and grain work well in this image also... nice work :) - setzler

alu
by nathaliedoo

Comment:
nice shot :) I like the simplicity of this image... - setzler

Hen
by GinaRothfels

Comment:
The yellow is definitely present in this image, but I can' get too excited about the overall image. The visual appeal, to me, is weak :( - setzler