Shoe Leather Express...Taking Him Where He Wants to Go
by PHOTOCHlX

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Photochix....

The challenge is met nicely with this photo... I particularly liked some of the images in this challenge that took alternative paths from the 'normal' modes of transportation that everyone would normally think about.

I think you did a good job of composing the legs/feet on the right hand side of the frame... that definitely works better than centering in a horizontal frame. I think this photo could also potentially be strong with centered legs/feet in a vertical frame, allowing the feet to fall on the bottom horizontal third line...

I think this composition could use a little color also... The skin tone of the legs stand out nicely, but if there was some other element of color here, i think it would benefit the image. Maybe some colored socks or something would create that little surprise element that makes the photo really jump.

I also think the shoe may be a little close to the bottom of the frame for comfort... A little extra breathing room there could strengthen the composition as well...

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

The Shooter
by autool

Comment:
nice work :) the dirty finger and the dirrt under the fingernails bring out the kid theme in this photo nicely... that was good thinking to plan that out because kids always have dirty hands :)

Confusion. Which Shall I Choose?
by GolferDDS

Comment:
The lighting seems just a tad flat in this image... the border is also seems to be pullin my eyes just a little...

Out come the heroes
by johnmk

Comment:
I would probably like this one a lot more if the head wasn't in the shadows...

Not Another Push Pin Entry!!!....Argh!!
by orussell

Comment:
the abstract of this photo is quite appealing, but I have to say that the title doesn't do much for it :)

Primary Pegs
by sher

Comment:
This is an interesting shot, but the saturation of the colors seems a bit overpowering for my taste...

primary curves
by shutterfly

Comment:
excellent abstract... I think a tad more light and a tad more sharpness would set this in motion nicely :)

Primary Clover
by tyrkinn

Comment:
excellent primary color shot... I think it would have been even stronger as a vertical shot which would have allowed you to not be 'dead centered' and fill more of the frame...

Transporter
by pitsaman

Comment:
The focus here is a bit soft... i think a sharper image would have performed better :)

primary colors
by Gotchya

Comment:
interesting take on the challenge... I, personally, don't like the interpretation *I* get from this photo :)