Tire
by DavidLevin

Comment:
David, greetings and welcome to DPChallenge. I like this photo quite a bit. This image, in itself, shows a good creative eye for composition... composition that is not your ordinary literal view of things. I wish you lots of luck in your photography... lots of luck in pursuing your dreams of being a film director also... photography would be a great basis for that :)

John Setzler

My protector, my hero !
by melissarts

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi melissarts...

This photo meets the challenge... the desaturation makes your secondary color stand out nicely...

The quality of this particular image is most likely what caused the low score... it also appears to be distorted from unproportional resizing.

Compositionally, i really like the perspective you chose for this shot... that shows some strength :)

Keep up the good efforts :)

John Setzler

Leading Lines To Knowledge
by Jonatan

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Jonatan...

This photo meets the challenge with no problem... the secondary colors play a strong role in the image and composition...

I like the composition you chose using the lines in the wood grain as leading lines... the depth of field is also excellent.

What is missing in this photo for me personally is a connection of some sort with the books. I'm sure these books have some meaning and relevance to a lot of people, but I'm not familiar with them and that is not your fault. I couldn't find any other way other than your excellent composition and exposure to really connect with this image.

Excellent shot... keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

Painted Tulips
by inspzil

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Bob...

This is a pretty good flower photo IMO... I like the composition and the depth of field choice works really well for me. The white spot that you mention in your comments is a bit of a distraction. Items like that are where you have to evaluate the question of settling for what you have or reshooting. The crop here may be just a little 'snug' also... A little extra breathing room would probably be a good thing.

I also agree with Crab... I think the photo is missing the blue element. My personal interpretation of this challenge was to include all three colors. I know the challenge description did not say that, but, to me, a photo doesn't fit a theme of primary colors unless they are all included.... just my personal view...

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

Morning Welcome
by DougPaz

Comment:
Hi Doug...

I like the composition you chose here... the square crop you chose seems to work very well in isolating your subject...

One of the things I particularly do like is the visibility of the detail behind the neon sign. It's muted enough that it's not obtrusive, but visible enough that it gives some good context to the photo. If those details were not visible, this would just look like a cartoon image or a photoshop rendering of a neon sign. Those visible details seem to keep this shot 'photographic' in nature. I have seen a lot of neon sign photos where nothing was visible except the color of the sign... I like the way this one turned out.

I think this shot would make a good 'product' photo in the neon sign industry. I have been fortunate enough to work with some sign makers in the past, and building neon signs is tough work. These people take pride in making a sign stand out like this and the inner workings of the sign is an art to them...

Nice work...

John Setzler

Womb of Beauty
by Jeileen

Comment:
excellent composition... the image is a bit noisy, but i like the softness... I can't seem to create a tie-in to the challenge though... = 3

Fluid painting
by christo

Comment:
Excellent shot... I'm glad you posted your 'description' on this because I was not able to determine exactly what I was looking at... very creative... nice work :)

Neck Plug: Interface Detail
by Gordon

Comment:
excellent work... great creativity and well thought out shot... = 10

Evolve
by Vipermike

Comment:
dam nice shot... best of show.. = 10

Simple.
by Geocide

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Geocide...

I think this is the beginning of a pretty strong abstract... I think your compositional choices on this photo are pretty good, but there may be a bit of room for suggestion here... I don't know how many different compositions you tried, but I'm thinking that a little rotation on the 'object' could create some more strength in the image. I think a slight rotation would create some diagonal strength in the lines of the image...

I like the starkness of the exposure here also. The high key creates a lot of good contrast and sets an interesting overall mood for the shot.

Excellent work...

John Setzler