The Möbius Loop
by e301

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

I think you did a great job on the lighting with this photo. The shading is nice on the white, and the exposure seems good. This is also an example of a good centered composition. This subject is a good attention grabber. I like to let my eye 'walk' the strip :) The only thing that looks a little odd to me in this image is that it's possibly oversharpened a tad. There are some 'jags' appearing for me that usually indicate that to be a problem.

The black background here works nicely to isolate your subject from the environment. There may also be some opportunities for strength in this photo by creating a gradient background with some additional creative lighting.

Nice work :)

Under the Bridge to Has Been and Always
by JPR

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Jason...

Your photo meets the challenge well in my opinion. The repeating patterns of the pilings seem to have no end. I particularly like the bit of fog that is present on the surface of the water. That adds an interesting element of mystery to the image. In general, I enjoy photos where the 'gemoetries' make up the strength of the image.

My interest in this particular photo fades away rather quickly because of the lighting. This scene has a lot of contrast and no primary point of interest. It is, entirely, a shapes and patterns theme more than anything else. I think there may be a strong photo waiting for you in this scene if you can find it :) If I may, I would suggest some rotation of the view to strengthen the diagonal theme as well.

The secret of the sun
by hilmarsig

Comment:
why did you fire your flash in this photo?

Midnight Hour Encores by Bruce Brooks
by BobsterLobster

Comment:
This is nice work... I think this would have made a lovely vertical with more of your model composed in the frame... excellent work...

To the Lighthouse
by dan_pendleton

Comment:
excellent :)

Arizona Landmarks
by Artifacts

Comment:
Almost a nice photo... the book in the bottom of the image sorta ruins it though.

The Adventures Of Tom Sawyer
by OneSweetSin

Comment:
Nice idea for this challenge. Composition is also good... I think the image may be a tad overexposed, but other than that looks good :)

"Are you my mother?"
by thefragile

Comment:
my favorite of the week.

The Joy Of Cooking
by GeneralE

Comment:
cute :)

Potty Book for Boys. 2 by Alyssa Satin Capucilli
by kinks

Comment:
I think the post processing choices you made here ruined the photo.