Dyslexia
by frisca

Comment:
Novel idea - compellingly executed. Red is a good color choice - makes you feel the frustration at the indeciferable (ouch! my spelling!) jumble of letters. The blackness works with this too.

Life Saver
by Annida

Comment:
Tossed in the air - on the way to saving someone. Nice action - good use of off center. Wisht the light were more compelling. The image seems flat - A cloudy day? A deffinite direction to the light would help the viewers sense of up and down and the action of the life saver.

Look Grandmammy, No Hands
by boyte1

Comment:
Nice idea! Good stopped motion. You never feel quite so off center as when you are jumping from a swing:) I like the hand against the cloud, and the climbing structure sphere looks a little like a planet that your subject is orbitting, but the rest of the background is distracting. IS there another angles you could have taken the pic from to minimize the houses? Probably not it looks like a full neighborhood. How about at night with a flash - the building would be dark?

Learning To Fly
by Diversq

Comment:
Baby blue jay! The dof works so well here - the clear path in the grass where the bird is looking guides both the flying lesson and the viewers eye. lovely.

Rachelle
by angg

Comment:
Interesting silouette. The blue light is eerie. and not being able to see her iris adds to that. Is that a microphone - top left? Where is she, what is she doing? Wish the image were sharper, and your intent clearer.

Annisquam Harbor Lighthouse
by KarenB

Comment:
I like the solitary feeling the off center composition brings. Fit well with the subject. I wish I could see more of the water (at first the beach looked more like a parking lot to me) It is also a bit dark - but it looks like it was taken as the sun was coming up or down.

Dreaming of Flight
by Malokata

Comment:
Nice composition - the rings of stone and the girl's figure crossing into them as she atempts flight - good use of off center - conveys action and potential.

Fuchsia
by GolferDDS

Comment:
your lighting really carves out the petals nicely. I wish that just one bloom was hanging from the top right corner not the buds too. It would be even more dramatic. I wonder how it would look with a different background color - say green or yellow to contrast with the flower's colors?

Playing Fields
by Konador

Comment:
that is quite some green and blue. Having the goal posts off center leads the viewer into the photo nicely.

Shoes in the Rain
by DennisF

Comment:
Composition is great the shoes are the first thing we see alone in the bottom, the curve of the pool draws our eyes arounf the the chairs. Wish the back left weren't so dark - it makes it hard to see compared to the bright stones inthe foreground.