Day 04 The Bridge
by lilkarebear

Comment:
The B&W tones are wonderful and the image is pin sharp (which is amazing considering you were in a driving car). I agree with hajeka that the composition could be better but the rest of the image is strong enough that I don't really care.

Treescape
by Ben

Comment:
Very similar to the image I submitted in Fill the Frame (which did really bad). I still like it though. To me, it shows you are able to see beyond what regular people will see (a tree). The focus is really sharp and the DOF gives a nice transition from front to back. Ideally, I would have placed the "sharp focus" area in the lower third of the frame instead of right in the middle.

Tweetie
by sfalice

Comment:
Tweetie's a real sweetie then! The B&W conversion suits him really well. The eyes are in sharp focus but the DOF is a bit narrow for my comfort. I would have liked the "eyebrows" (?) to be in sharp focus too. But that a minor thing, the picture is really good.

Day4.jpg
by FotoMunki

Comment:
This is lovely, with nice contrast and pleasing DOF throughout the image. The eye wanders back and forth. The light is just great and complements the "fluffiness" of the grasses.

Day 04 - Neo
by hajeka

Comment:
OK, can't say anything more than what you've already said about your picture (you know where the weaknesses are). It seems to me that we take better picture when we're happy with the subject. Any time I've taken a picture "'cause I had to", I was disappointed by the result. You'll do better tomorrow. Yesterday's shot was really nice, especially the sky.

PS: I saw the fish in your portfolio - you are better off with the cat!

E N C O U N T E R
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
Art, i love your borders!! They really add to your images and with this little model of yours, they do magic! Great job!

VooDoo
by sfalice

Comment:
Not too dark on my monitor but I can see a light fringing on the edge where you extracted the image from its original background. If you had placed it against a white or pale gray background, it would have been totally invisible and much better in my opinion. That being said, kudos to you for being able to show details in such a dark fur. It was a tricky exposure and you got it right.

Day 4.jpg
by codfish

Comment:
I like this a lot - I have seen houses like this in Montreal where they come in the color version ;-)

However, I agree with ephln and I'd clone out the lonely branch. It messes your otherwise nice composition.

Day 4 - Time Flies
by ephln

Comment:
I know I'm having fun so far - in fact, I think I prefer those side challenges to the real ones. I get more comments and really have a feeling I can impove with the feedback I get.

Nice candid shot. I know of a few persons who could hang a flag like this in front of their homes...

Day 04
by Dirt_Diver

Comment:
Love the treatment you gave this - the vignetting makes the graffiti really stand out. The texture of the wall is also amazingly rendered. I can almost feel the roughness of the concrete!