Morning Coffe At the Lake
by CJinCA

Comment:
Coffee has 2 E's :) I see where you are going with this. Nice idea but the execution is a wee bit lacking. Your onboard flash left a glare on the cup and the PJs. The lake scene is very flatly lit and out of focus. With this type of shot, you really need a higher f-stop. The PJs are not the main subject, the coffee cup and the lake are. If you do this shot again, try placing the camera on a tripod behind you, lay down more so more of the PJs can be captured, and try using a longer shutter speed and no flash.

The Dreaming
by lykofos

Comment:
I don't understand your title at all. I am guessing it means we are looking at the dreaming person? BUT, the PJs are very nice and your whole scene conveys an idea, which I really love. Her PJs are an important part of this composition, IMO. Very nice focus, saturation, and colour. Overall, a well done image.

She likes to take her pajamas off.
by MelissaK

Comment:
I am totally missing the point... are these the dog's PJs that you are talking about? Or is the dog rolling in its mistresses PJs? I can see what look like boxers and a dog's head... but it's not coming together for me. I like the tones and the focus on the dog's eyes is great. I would like to see the PJs take more of a center-stage roll. :)

Pajama Party with Winnie the Pooh
by bobnospum

Comment:
I love the title. Winnie the Pooh is awesome. Here are the points that I feel are good: Your colour. Very nicely done. Your light. Good job on the natural vignette at the top of the image. The inclusion of the doll. It really gives some depth to the image. Things that could be improved upon: The top is cut off on the right. A wider shot would have been better. The PJ bottoms. Where are they? How do we know this isn't just a T-Shirt? Overall, a good job.

California Dreamin'
by anthonyczaja

Comment:
Beautiful landscape. This is what I would dream of :) I do wish there were more of the PJs as the subject. As it stands now, the landscape commands most of the attention. Since it is aesthetically pleasing and the focus is good, it keeps the interest though. Nice job.

Let me sleep in!!!
by cloe15

Comment:
Cute PJs :) Your colour seems to be a bit off (yellow). WB to tungsten in this situation. You also have quite a bit of noise (grain) in the photo. A lower ISO can fix this. Try to shoot everything indoors at ISO 100 when possible. You will get less noise. :)

Happy Feet
by BAMartin

Comment:
I see where you are going with this, but the execution of the idea might need some tweaking. Your focus is a tad soft. Try USM in photoshop or using a higher f-stop. The PJs are not the subject of this image, the feet are. Perhaps a full body shot would have been better for a PJs challenge. Your colour is off. A little to the yellow side. WB to tungsten or fluorescent indoors depending on what kind of lights you are under. This looks tungsten, fluorescent would be bluer.

sleep walking
by saintaugust

Comment:
Your concept is good. I like the idea that your PJ bottoms have left you and are taking a stroll. I would like to see the whole of the bottoms but I do understand that you had to attach them to something somewhere. :) I lament the lost foot, it makes the image feel a bit cramped. I'd like to see more of the whole scene. Overall, nicely done.

gorilla brand Jungle Jammies
by ambaker

Comment:
Nice concept, but your photo is lacking in focus and PJs. A higher f-stop might have been the way to go here. Of course, it could have been shutter speed. Try setting the camera on a railing or other stable surface for anything below 1/60s. However, your light is great and your exposure is nice.

Bedtime Hero
by cloudsme

Comment:
Your pose and attention to the pajamas is wonderful! Very nicely lit. Very nice catchlights. Nice depth. This image only has 1 thing that is lacking. Contrast. Your colours seem a hair washed out. Otherwise, wonderfully done!