Bedtime Story
by Joker1114

Comment:
I like your idea. There are a few things that would have made your composition a bit stronger, the PJs lose center stage here because of the huge book covering them. Having the kids lay on their tummies with a vertical comp might have been better to show them. Your lighting is kinda flat. Meaning there is no difference between light and dark areas so your image lost depth. Focus is just a hair soft, try a bigger f-stop. Cute kids though and, like I said, a good idea.

Morning Has Broken
by jomari

Comment:
I don't really see the PJs in this shot. I'm thinking they might be the orangy things there in the middle? This shot has GREAT focus and beautiful light, it just looks really messy/cluttered. Example: There is something going across the top left corner, can't even tell what it is; and there is something that looks like it might be a painting in the top right corner. I can't give you any help here except to remind you that composition plays a huge roll.

Day 02 - Market War
by shalrath

Comment:
I really like this. It is a very well captured shot on spur-of-the-moment. These kinds of opportunities don't come along very often. Good for you for being there and getting the shot. Very nice focus and your crop is perfect (including the shoe was genius).

Favorite Frog PJ's
by Pipe_Dream

Comment:
If that flash had been just a hair more behind the camera, this would be the perfect image. PJs are truly shown off here. Very nice job.

t h r e e X t w o
by mpeters

Comment:
PJs with feet are the best :) The crop is a little disturbing to me. I would like to see the full image BUT!! Your focus is FABULOSO!! Your light is GREAT and your colours POP perfectly :) hehe Very nice.

Comfy PJs
by Patsfan

Comment:
This is a nice shot. I would like to see the background, as it is right now, you are kind-of floating in space. Your WB is a little off (yellowish). Try balancing it to tungsten next time, it adds some blue (which would also make your PJs pop a little more). Your focus is good, light on your face is nice, and your pose is great. All-in-all, not too bad :)

Early Morning Ride
by socalsteve

Comment:
I love your idea. There is just one thing that could make this image better for this particular challenge. Pan back a little and fill the frame with those gorgeous PJs. You have a lovely model and I only wish I had a horse to ride at 7am :) Good luck.

What Dreams May Come
by cablondeone

Comment:
This is an excellent idea and a great movie title image title too. This would have been wonderful if not so bright. You really need to find a way to dial down your flash if you are going to use it at this close range. You did a very nice job with the PJs, his eyes compliment them well.

sunshiny
by heavenly

Comment:
You did a great conversion here. I am not too fond of the huge border though. B&W images usually don't take a lot of size/space so go for filling up the allotted space with your image. The light on the child's face is a little bit too dark, a reflective surface on this side would have remedied that. Her right shoulder is blending into the BG. I actually like the brightness back there behind her head though.

Hey handsome, want to come to my pajama party?
by ShutterPug

Comment:
OH MY GOODNESS!! How in the world did you get that rose in that dog's mouth? :) That is the cutest shot ever! I am not fond of the red backdrop, would like to see the white all the way over it... but, that is aesthetics. This is just too darn cute!