The old house's
by eikidigi

Comment:
I think it's a bit dark and the text is too much. THe building on the right is cool - the ones on the left are a bit too dark to see much detail.

Mobil Pegasus
by cmrk74

Comment:
Does not scream "Dallas!" to me - except the very cool border.

breakthrough
by helgihelgi

Comment:
This is a good picture - I'm not sure how good of a postcard it is. It doesn't look appealing - with the one flower bent over and stuff.

Anything goes on the Queen's Birthday in Amsterdam
by johnmk

Comment:
Not sure how this sells your town very well. The main subject is facing the wrong way. A bit washed out, too. Good try!

.25 cents each / 5 for $1.00
by KarenB

Comment:
THE most scenic of the scenery shots. I wish there was some bird or person or lighthouse to catch our attention on - but this is beautiful. 10.

Jefferson Memorial
by magnetic9999

Comment:
Nice low sunlight. It looks so warm and inviting. I like how the composition fills the majority of the space. I would take this same shot but try to eliminate the trees behind and try a bright blue day - could make this 10 a PERFECT 10! :)

Texas
by DennisF

Comment:
An exellent illustration of what Texas is. Nice accompanying text. Is this part of a statue? I love the crop here. It makes me want to see more. Perfect color - 10.

Hi there! Greetings from Frisco!!
by Pep Ventosa

Comment:
The use of text here clearly enhances, rather than detracts from this shot. The border does well to stay out of the way of a clear, bright and superb shot. Excellent work. I wouldn't change anything - 10.

In the Blink of an Eye
by StevePax

Comment:
Greetings fromt the Critique Club
Hi Steve!

Composition
I understand your theme well. But what happened in the blink? If we saw more - something more - like an egg dropping from shoulder height to her waist or something - as she blinked. Like "as she's blinking, it's falling." (or some other such nonsense) The crop is very tight.

Color
The colors look just a hair washed out - maybe a bit more brightness and contrast would take that white film look off. I like the colors you do have.

Focus
Looks a bit soft and dreamy. You didn't write what your intent was, so I'll just say it looks soft - if that's what you were going for, congrats. :)

Subject matter
As I said above - I wish there was something to show the timeline of a blink... the eye is good and "blink of an eye" is a great storyline for a triptych!

Overall
I like this shot - I think it has great potential!

Happy shooting and good luck!

Electric Midnight Express
by magnetic9999

Comment:
Is this the kind of photographer I could become after 50 challenges?! I hope so! Congrats, Mag!