Alexander
by ToborKnip

Comment:
This is really close . . but the eyes just don't quite look in focus to me, (The point of focus seems to be on his eyebrows rather than his eyes, otherwise nice shot.

Pee-ka-boo
by naomik

Comment:
What crazy eyes ! He looks tremendous.

Innocent Soul
by Lonz

Comment:
Really good - should go all the way.

Love it.

Fascinated Stare
by Nobody

Comment:
A nice portrait rather let down by the glare on her skin from the lighting. Get that under control, and the rest is looking good.

when she is looking like that ...
by cirrasch

Comment:
Nice strong, bold shot.

my brown eyed girl
by margiemu

Comment:
Sweet portrait.

What huge pupils though - just how dark was the room you were shooting in ??!!

Goodness Gracious, Great Balls of Fire!
by Skip

Comment:
ROFL !! First time I have seen this - there may possibly never be a better title for this shot . .

Tea - Best Drink of the Day
by TacTZilla

Comment:
I quite like this shot - but you have a real 'fisheye' thing going on here with your verticals all over the place.

You either need to lose the effect, or embrace it with a title that acknowledges the issue and uses it to bring the viewer more into the shot, so maybe something like 'Tea - Helps straighten things out'

Sierra Mist
by tryingtostayinfocus

Comment:
I quite like the crop here, but it could do with way more saturation and contrast to really make it 'pop'.

Chucks
by ct

Comment:
I'm guessing here that 'Chucks' are the shoes she's wearing ?

They are a nice strong colour to photograph - the only issue is that they get a little lost in the business of the picture. You have a mass of vertical and horizontal lines in this shot, as well as very ligh and very dark areas, all of which lead the eye away from the shoes.

Perhas if you could have gone for a simpler shot, with a less cluttered background ? maybe even get the model to bring her feet up onto the table and rest her chin on her knees so that she is a more compact shape, and the shoes are sideways onto the camera, so we can get to see them in all their glorious pinkness ? :- )

Good luck in the challenge.