depression: alone in a crowd
by cycloxslug

Comment:
Interesting idea. When I first saw it I thought it would suit something more towards Viagra...but then that is where the depression could come from. the light is too harsh on the right, and I think that the focus could be just a touch sharper on that poor guy on the right. It seems that is just a touch behind the area of interest. Not totally sure but I feel the WB could be adjusted a little too, seems a bit muddy, throughout.

I'm Giving Up and Eating Chocolates...
by annasense

Comment:
An otherwise interesting perspective, without a really sharp area of focus

Chocolate Reflections
by sharvey

Comment:
Great perspective, but way OOF and lots of color noise noted in the bottom half of this.

Jenny
by chookie

Comment:
The focus is a touch off. Eyes are usually what you want to focus on with people, but the chocolate should be the subject for this. not too interesting.

Sweet breakfast
by spaque99

Comment:
Hmmm...I love the composition of this, but the noise/grain is bothersome and really detracts from it.

Chocoholic's delight
by kirtiebu

Comment:
Nice set up, but it looks like you got some camera shake on the left side (?). It actually appears that the DOF needs to be deeper, since some things on the right are more in focus than the rest, and with a straight on shot, i would expect to see it all in focus.

With Love
by Nitin

Comment:
Looks like you had soke decent lighting set up. Trying to get rid of shadows totally would seem to look better. this one suffers mostly from being OOF, way OOF.

Cool Hot Chocolate
by johnm

Comment:
Ummmm....K. How about, alot of hot spots from the flash.

Fast break from work! Its gone and I'm back to work now!
by tolovemoon

Comment:
The flash is too bright on the paper and then falls off on the ends. Leaves ugly shadows behind also. Seems a touch OOF where I expect it to be on the left side.

Mmmm....Good!
by jazzmanmgt

Comment:
What appears to be a very nice shot, but suffers from being way too small. Unable to properly judge this