Melissa
by doug61853

Comment:
The models pose looks uncomfortable, and not at all natural. I would suggest that you play around with some different styles of lighting, too.

Neon Music Shop Window
by Sheryll

Comment:
I gave you a 3 for this, although it was a very close run thing to a 4 - don't be too disheartened though, because I did vote consistently lower than my average throughout this challenge. Ivo has pretty much summed up my feelings - you have competently photographed someone elses artwork, but haven't brought anything of yourself to it. I note that you say you had originally wanted to photograph the series of three panels, but that someone was sat in front of one of them - I wonder whether there might have been a photo opportunity in that. Hope this explains one of your votes.

Glassware
by nicoledb

Comment:
A really strong study in b&w. I have some reservations about the overall composition, but a very strong entry nonetheless.

Inspect Carefully
by ElGordo

Comment:
Superb texture and detail and good tonal ranges.

Absolut Spots
by DrAchoo

Comment:
Love the idea and composition - I think it could have done with a bit more brightness to give it some added umph. Nonetheless, a solid 6.

Hot Spots
by lucienaw

Comment:
I feel that a photo should have some purpose - but I can't find one here...

Star Spots
by sherpet

Comment:
A bit too over-saturated for my taste, but disregarding that it is certainly a strong composition, sharply focussed and fits the challenge well.

The Corps
by groundbeef

Comment:
You have exposed for the whites well, although the rest is perhaps a tad dark. You have clearly given thought to the composition, but it could perhaps do with a bit more playing around with - perhaps with some items leaning against others, or some raised up.

Home
by mcgoffinet

Comment:
The composition seems to casual to be effective, as though a shot has been very quickly grabbed.

Hat of a soldier
by The_squirrel

Comment:
The composition lacks umph - perhaps you might like to try a square crop with the cap and gun framed diagonally.