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by undieyatch

Comment:
An interesting concept with the grain - great you are trying new things! Not sure it works for me, as the pattered look in the center of the flower detracts from the depth (flower looks a bit flat).

Night Time Stroll
by jaysonmc

Comment:
Jayson, I gave you a "6" on this shot. I thought the perspective and DOF were interesting, and I liked the tones, but there is something missing to give it that extra "punch" for me. I think that technically it is quite good, and it is very pleasing to the eye, but there isn't an emotive? Please keep in mind this is just my .02 and I love many of your photos - I think you have an awesome eye!

Day-10-BW-IMG_2498-hotel.jpg
by JerseyGenie

Comment:
What a fascinating property this is - almost looks like three or four houses collapsing on each other...I think the composition is very strong here. Maybe consider a little dodging on the side of the bottom house? Anyway, I really like this. Very interesting photo.

Day 10
by darnok

Comment:
Wow - weird and spooky - I like it a lot. Great example of low-key.

nine/thirty
by UNCLEBRO

Comment:
I think this is an (unusual?) instance where the shadows actually enhance a very simple object. It might look to flat/stagnant otherwise.

Plant
by Melethia

Comment:
Wow - this does have a definite greenish tint, but I like it. I think the tint definitely enhances it. I do agree with Roz that the berries might benefit from a touch of sharpening, and I'm not sure about the leaf on the far left side. I'm really glad you shared this, though, as it is interesting to see what minor toning adjustments will do to/for a photo!

Day 10 - Untitled
by Bruce_the_Robert

Comment:
I'm impressed - the whites look perfect on this - can't think of a single way to improve this simple yet effect image.

Day 11.jpg
by edmeng

Comment:
This is really, really cool. I am impressed with how many details are in this photo, yet it doesn't seem too busy. It has an aura of mystery and industrial abandon. Adding to faves.

child IMG_2284.jpg
by dsterner

Comment:
What a cutie! Just a lovely child. I like the shadows on her face a lot - adds interest - focus seems just a touch soft.

11
by sevilduvarci

Comment:
Great candid moment! I think you did a great job of toning and keeping the details from overwhelming this shot.