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| 05/22/2008 06:19:49 PM |
Duck Soupby Wenders11Comment: Nice but I am not really seeing the dappled light in this shot. |
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| 05/22/2008 06:19:20 PM |
Goslingsby ralphComment: A little hot in some places. I am also not really seeing the dappled light here. |
| 05/22/2008 06:18:17 PM |
Standing Tallby Nikolai1024Comment: Nice dappled light shown here. The image has been oversaturated however which has results in some bad noise. |
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| 05/22/2008 06:17:15 PM |
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| 05/22/2008 10:47:58 AM |
XYZ by gauravComment: Greetings from the Critique club!
Interesting idea. When I first saw this shot I thought that the letters were engraved in stone. This is probably due to the texture of the paper that is well captured. The upper part of the shot is quite bright and is quite distracting.
The subject is simple and for many viewers it would seem that there is little to hold their interest. I personally enjoyed the simplicity of this image however so I wouldn't put to much stock in either opinion.
I like the angle that was chose as it really creates a feeling of depth.
As for the challenge? XYZ are letters yes but each of those letters appear by themselves in the dictionary WITH definitions. That in my books (and Webster's) makes them words.
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| 05/22/2008 02:01:03 AM |
Best place to finish the bookby RUEDISCHMUTZComment: Not really seeing the dappled light I am afraid. The subject is in deep shadows and you have a really bright sky so my eye is all over the place. Leaving your model right where she is and taking your shot from the tree to the right likely would have captured better lighting. (I am guessing though) |
| 05/22/2008 01:58:59 AM |
Dappling In Deathby bvyComment: I won't take marks off but why did you feel it was necessary to include "dappling" in the title? What would you have called this shot had it been for a free study? That, in my opinion is the approach you should take to titling your image for challenges. If you have to use the challenge topic in the title then it usually means you are trying to shoe horn your image into the challenge. (Not in this case however)
Now that my mini-rant is over how about something constructive? Good demonstration of dappled light that certainly fits the challenge. I like the monochrome but I am also curious what this would look like in colour. Dappled light tends to make a shot feel warm and relaxed. Monochrome tends to "sanitize" an image for lack of a better term. Just a thought though and I think it could work either way.
I really like the leading lines of the shot. Its too bad that the back stones are so bright but it probably couldn't be helped.
Overall a good entry for the challenge. Well done! |
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| 05/22/2008 01:52:59 AM |
Shining Through Your Thoughtsby gg3rdComment: Your model could have taken up more of the frame and had she been placed IN the light I think this would have been a more interesting shot. The way it is right now its a picture of a barn interior with a girl in it. |
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| 05/22/2008 01:51:55 AM |
Come to Meby dsmilComment: Okay...I have to say. Where is the dappled light? I see some sort of light in the top left but its not dappled at all. |
| 05/22/2008 01:51:22 AM |
TIGRESSby ALAComment: A little hot in places but the lighting is quite contrasty. |
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