Holocaust Memorial by Rachel Whiteread
by ramone

Comment:
interesting. i think I'd have liked to see you take the bottom of the pic right to the floor - i think it would have added some power to the shot. i really like the lines though.

Right into the Candy Store
by Lee31

Comment:
the lighting is a little harsh, and it's a bit blurry. shooting glass can be hard like that - a polarizing filter would have done wonders. you can clean some up with photoshop, but the filter is the best way to go. also, I might have cropped the image more on the right - being able to see the bottom of the window takes some of the flow out of the pic. good effort.

Beautiful right angles of a girl :)
by csoka

Comment:
don't listen to those who complain about nudes. This is a great shot that fits the challenge well. To add a little depth, I might have added a few more right angles - her shoulder, elbow, knees...sometimes you gotta smack these guys in the face so they get it :)

Grinstone Bridge
by dustin03

Comment:
i love stuff like this. nice feel to it. I might have cropped out a bit of the dead space on the right, but that's just me - nothing wrong with your crop as is.

Looking Up To Look Down
by GolferDDS

Comment:
I know, stupid nitpicking, but too bad you didn't have shorter hair. then you'd get your whole head in the square. not gonna mark you down for it mind you. :) neat idea, excellent crop. Pedro

Symphony of Light and Shadow
by La-Luna

Comment:
who cares if the front is blown out a little. this is fantastic. beautiful texture, great composition. i like the feeling of depth, although I might like it a bit more if you used a wider lens...were you zoomed all the way out? If you were, it would bring the far wall into focus a bit better. Who knows, maybe your cam doesn't do that...if that's the case, double congrats on a great shot.

The Corner of the Corner Store
by fleenk

Comment:
your border colour is off, but i like the rest. good perspective and nice depth. really nice texture to this as well. when in doubt, subtle black or white border (a hard lesson learned here - probably lost a ribbon because of it)

Made in Taiwan
by GeorgesBogaert

Comment:
I'd have made this black and white or some duotone, to compensate for the yellowish tinge to the floor; it clashes a bit with the cleaner colour of the screen. Nice capture though

My Corner of the World
by LeahStephen

Comment:
colour looks really flat - almost like you desturated it, or tried for a sepia tone that missed the mark by a bit. lighting is good, and some definite strength in the angles.

Generations
by arnit

Comment:
almost too subtle for most DPCers. bet you're getting comments like "where're the right angles?" I like it, either way. only thing I'd change if I could is the flare onthe blurry kid's head. It's a bit distracting, taking away from the cool old guy on the bench. I like the presence of the kid, he's just a bit too prominent with the sun on his head.