Just One (On a Brush)
by freakin_hilarious

Comment:
Cool idea! Not sure I like the red background very much, and it almost looks like the saturation is too high... but an interesting, unique shot!

Crib Coiffe
by OmanOtter

Comment:
haha! A hilarious expression! The lighitng is very nice here, but it looks a little grainy. Maybe lowering the ISO would help that a little bit. Cute shot!

macro hair
by valiooo

Comment:
wow! VERY awesome! A really unique idea. Not sure I like the green/yellow colors all that much, nut everything else here is really neat.

happy hair
by tnun

Comment:
Well, it's a little bit to dark, and it looks like the saturation was too high. Maybe the biggest problem here though, is the grain. If you look in areas like her face for example, you'll see blotchy spots of color. I've had that same problem when my ISO was too high. Try lowering it a bit, and you'll end up with a smoother, less grainy image. Very good try though! I like how the subject's eyes aren't looking strait at the camera!

bad hair day
by messerschmitt

Comment:
A neat portrait! The only thing that I can think of that might improve the shot a little, is if there was some more light on the lower, darker half of the photo. I like the added detail of the photo on the wall!

Head Banger's Ball
by liberty

Comment:
A little bit too confusing for me - the composition is so busy I realy don't know what's going on. Interesting idea though!

hair
by cal_russell

Comment:
This is kind of a cool idea! Here's my two cents on what might help this photo out a little. :)
From what I can make out, it LOOKs like you focused on the face, instead of the hair. This is very good! But since there is so much unfocused hair in front of the focused face, it's hard to tell, and it looks like the whole picture is out of focus. :( It might be really cool if you had moved some of the hair away so there was no hair in front of the eye.
Secondly, the lighting is rather harsh. Many of the highlights look blown out and too white. I'm guessing that you used a flash? I don't know all that much about using the flash, but I think that if you use it too close, things get too bright and washed out, like in this shot.

Well, I hope that was helpful. Keep shooting! :)

Anticipation is Makin' Me Wait...
by Dancing620queen

Comment:
Hmmm.. I might suggest some different composition, or maybe a different point of view. Good try though!

Human Lens
by breadfan35

Comment:
This is amazing. I LOVE the blue-green colors, and the selective desaturation. At first it looks like it's just a cool shot of an eye, then you see the reflection. Something about the selective desaturation does that I think - it's like two different worlds that are separate, and yet one and the same.
I almost want to say that it would be nice if you could spot-edit out all the veins (particularly the really squigly one in the right - it makes me squirm!) but I'm not sure. They sort of add something to the shot.
My conclusion: This is an absolutely wonderful, phenomenal shot. It's so unique and unusual! Awesome!

Unnatural Habitat
by Omni

Comment:
Very interesting! I like the colors here... and the way they are reflected.