The ear is the avenue to the heart (Voltaire)
by Ecce_Signum

Comment:
Andi, it tipped over the 6, yippee!

Constructive Geometry
by Melethia

Comment:
Well done on the top 20 Deb!

Audi: Colorado
by Soul

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Looking at the comments below, I see that you have not marked some as helpful. That is very interesting because instead of the normal one or two words, at least two of those comments are extremely helpful as they are explaining to you why you like only scored a 5.00. I am likely to repeat most of what they said in my critique.

The composition is good, you have the car driving into the frame which works well. The choice to use a sort of letterbox crop is interesting and I'm not 100% sure that this works that well. I think I would prefer to see a little more vertical height above the roof of the car.

The focus seems a bit off, the rocks to the right of the frame are sharp but the car is not that sharp (it doesn't really look like motion blur). Also, the image feels a bit flat with regard to the lighting. A boost in levels would likely have helped a bit here, as it seems a bit underexposed.
As this was an advanced editing challenge, you could have selected the car and adjusted the levels (midtones) specifically for the car and then inverted the selection and boosted the rest of the image (highlights). I feel sure this would have helped.

As this was a automobile ad, I think you would have really helped your score by adding some text/graphics to the image. Most of the higher scoring images had texts added.

I was surprised this didn't score higher. It is a good image that could benefit from a bit more advanced editing. Hopefully you understand a bit better now why it only scored a 5.00.

Stand Out!
by witt34

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club

I read your photographers notes and noted that you did not shoot this specifically for this challenge. It is a pity that you had not taken the shot just a couple of seconds sooner, so that the car is entering the frame rather than leaving it. This would have given you more space to the left to add your text. The car would also not have been competing as much with the background.

The background is a bit distracting and I do believe it cost you a few points. I notice you are in South Korea, so it is probably not unusual to see the text as written over to the right. Again, I think this probably cost you a few points in the scoring, even though some of your commenters liked it that way.

Suzuki XL7
by aliqui

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Congrats on the 6+ score and 20th place.

It was interesting just now reading through the comments, I was amazed how many people didn't get the tagline. I thought it was self evident, but there ya go!

Composition in this image is very strong, although perhaps the shipwreck does over power the car a little. I know it was luck that you managed to get this shot and that it was not a set up, so the car colour was not optional, but that said, I do think a stronger coloured car would have helped. As this was an advanced challenge, I wonder if you could have switched the colour of the car for something else? Just a thought and probably a silly one at that.

It's interesting to watch how the trends come and go on DPC. Currently Topaz Adjust is all the rage and I can see you have used it here. I think used with a bit of discretion this tool can really enhance the processing of some images, but to be perfectly honest, I think it is a little bit too heavy in this image and it has spoilt the quality of the image a bit. I may be the only one thinking like this however, as you did indeed get a decent score.

Like I said, good strong composition, that was hurt a little for me, by a bit of heavy processing.

1985 HONDA SHADOW VT500C
by tryals15

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club

I think you know immediately why this only scored 5.47. If you wanted to get a higher score, then you should not have entered a bike in an automobile ad. Langdon's description even mentions cars, so honestly, you took a risk and you probably knew it ahead of time.

That said, I think the image itself is great. The composition is excellent. The sky, however, feels a little over exposed, always challenging in such bright sunshine not to do that. The bike itself could benefit from being a little bit lighter, but again, not a biggy. The graphics also work, although I perhaps would have left off the border. I think there is a conflict between the cleanness of the advertising graphic and the grunginess of the border, so I think I'd do without the border.

Overall I think this was very well done, but I'm not surprised it didn't do better. In a different challenge I expect it would have been around 5.8 - 6.00.

2009 Toyota Matrix
by Citadel

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Conceptually a good car ad, composition is good, the graphics are good although not particularly sharp (don't know how to overcome that), but I believe what is letting you down is the post processing from the HDR image.

One of the problems I have experienced when using photomatix, is that the tonemapped image loses something along the way. Getting the tonemapping just right is I think very difficult. The car in your image has that weird very flat grey look often found in tonemapped images. There is a sort of halo effect around both the car and the mountains, which although only quite feint is there nonetheless. The image lacks contrast especially on the car. This is one of those cases I think where the HDR has not really improved the image.

Apart from the tonemapping problem, I think this was a well executed shot that met the challenge well.

Japanese Macaque in Jigokudani Yaenkoen Onsen
by Falc

Comment:
Keith, just wanted to come back and comment on this as I have just been watching a documentary about these monkeys. Absolutely fascinating. They seem almost human. I love this one.

Hood Ornament
by JoanieP

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Sorry you did not score higher with this image, I thought it was a fun entry.

This is sort of reminiscent of the 1970's style car shows, where beautiful women would be draped all over the cars on the stands.

I think the font also has a very 1970's feel to it, which may very well have cost you a few points as far as DPC is concerned. The car feels as though it is framed a bit too tightly. I would really like to see a little bit more of the car itself. Somebody else commented about the badge of the Cadillac being cut off, this likely cost you a few points. I have come to realise over the years on DPC, it is these really small details that typically make the difference between a lowish/average score and a higher score.

Well done though, for even though it didn't score so well, I think it was a very well conceived idea.

Reflections in a Rainy Civic
by posthumous

Comment:
Sorry Posthumous, you got me, so not sure I will be too helpful with the old poetry critique!

You know this was destined for a low score and kudos for you for doing this anyway. I do appreciate your talent, but do not have the verbal skills to express that appreciation. Unlike you, I am no wordsmith.