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| 07/24/2007 10:29:19 PM |
Can you spot the frog on the lily padsby ladpupmoeComment: Shot meets the challenge. The lily pads give a nice sense of rhythm to the scene. Technically the shot needs some work. The flower is overexposed and almost completely without detail. Also it might be more pleasing were the subject (the flower) on a thirds intersection. In the lower left it would nicely anchor the shot. |
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| 07/24/2007 10:27:42 PM |
With The Greatest Of Easeby scarbrdComment: The rhythm is escaping me. No very strong repetition of any subject or theme or pattern. It's not a bad shot, but I'm just failing to see how it's fitting into the challenge. Look forward to reading your notes afterwards. |
| 07/24/2007 10:25:59 PM |
Rhythm Of The Canyonby Wenders11Comment: I like the patterns created by the tree lines on the right and the dark shadows on the left slope. Not sure I would say they define the shot or add a real sense of rhythm, but overall it's a nice scene. |
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| 07/24/2007 09:39:07 AM |
Rhythm In Nature's Patternsby J-MeComment: I imagine you are taking a beating on this one. Tree bark could work for this challenge. Perhaps losing the blownout portion on the right of the shot would better focus attention on the patterns in your subject. Also, the subject itself needs to be in good focus without a heavy reliance on unsharp. Further, I think you could really increase the impact (and thus the 'wow' factor) by presenting this in black and white. It might make the most out of the paterns/rhythm in the bark by highlighting the contrasts of light and shapes contained within. |
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| 07/24/2007 12:14:06 AM |
Waves and Ripplesby BeeCeeComment: Strange. I hope you spend more time on this subject using different approaches to lighting, because somewhere out thre is a magic combination of subject and light which would cause this shot to just lay me out. As it is, it meets the challenge and is certainly unique but it leaves my eyes asking for more. |
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| 07/24/2007 12:12:27 AM |
Pipe and Picadillyby wetlandComment: Meets the challenge. I even like how the bare section of wall and pipe break up the rhythm of the rest of the shot. Wow factor? None. But I've been clicking through a lot worse on my way here. |
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| 07/24/2007 12:11:17 AM |
Melting The Rythmic Barrior.by JopperTomComment: Sorry, this just doesn't work for me. I like how the patterns of horizontal lines also form vertical lines, but the lighting and composition and processing are just not good imo. |
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| 07/24/2007 12:10:10 AM |
Peeking out from natures rhythmby ShamanComment: I don't get a sense of rhythm in this shot. One subject on one leaf. Really the only repeating patterns are whats visible in portions of the surface of the leaf. |
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| 07/24/2007 12:09:16 AM |
Colorful Linesby JeniYComment: Nice way to capture a few different patterns with color, shape and geometry. The upper right corner suffers from some pretty bad haloing though. |
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| 07/24/2007 12:07:51 AM |
Rhythm & Bluesby ivale28Comment: Nice patterns, good composition. This concept is pretty played out, but you've done a decent job with it here. My personal preference would be a somewhat wider dof to get a bit more of the rings in focus but that's me, and I didn't take shot! Nicely done. |
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