Reflections
by vtruan

Comment:
What was your purpose in dividing this up this way? What does each piece show us? Why is this better than showing a single frame? It's a beautiful picture, but the triptych format isn't adding anything for me, and is definitely detracting (again, for me).

The early bird.
by David Newland

Comment:
How cool to be able to feed it by hand! :) I love how you caught the bird's mouth open on the left.

The Landing
by Agaeris

Comment:
I like the story and the shots. For a little more visual interest, try it where the goose completely crosses the frame, so the middle shot's in the middle and the bottom one's on the left.

Losing its seeds
by kevip6

Comment:
As with the other dandelion triptychs, I like the idea. I also like your rough frame. However, the center head is blown out and the overall focus in each picture is soft. Look at the others to see alternatives.

Tigress
by Siggav

Comment:
I would like there to be 3 different poses. The left and right ones are nice, but the middle one seems to be just repeating the left one.

"To every thing there is a season"
by faery

Comment:
Nice to see your family growing! :) The lighting seems a bit off, though - maybe too yellow? I'm not very good at describing color casts, but I see something there.

Steeplechase
by andrea22_als

Comment:
Like looking at a filmstrip. Nice.

Firelight Fantasia
by purpleflutterby13

Comment:
Interesting choices. I like the lower left one best, mostly for the lighting. Actually, the nudity seems a bit pointless given the fire and reflection.

The placement of the lower left shot is a bit problematic - it seems to me that it should either overlap the one on the right by a lot more or not at all. The small overlap strikes me as accidental.

More Than A Weed
by ltlmschrisss

Comment:
I like the sentiment and the shots. The colors are putting me off, though. I like the strong contrast between subject and background in the middle, and would suggest finding similar contrasts for the others.

Hold you Hat
by B74A

Comment:
Hey, that's great timing! Did she find it later? I'd suggest adding some vertical white or black strips to help separate the frames.