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| 01/29/2017 06:27:24 PM |
Lost Wilderness by gyabanComment: Lovely work, Christophe, and I really had to look to see that this time you're morphing into a spider...like others I thought 'alien' off the bat. Still a very poignant shot, and of course congrats on the blue :-) |
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| 01/27/2017 02:45:36 PM |
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| 01/27/2017 02:44:29 PM |
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| 01/27/2017 08:20:06 AM |
a steamed shrimpby flahermaComment: I'm surprised that this one didn't ribbon...but then, omg, there is implied nudity...and we all know how DPC feels abut nudity! ;-) Good work on 7th place finish. |
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| 01/26/2017 11:56:37 PM |
Grandpa with grandsonby PompouspeteComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
I gave this a 7 in voting and am glad I did. There is a lot of story here, with the size and obvious age of grandpa's hand in a firm but loving restraint on the grandson's shoulder. I do find the processing on the hand might be a tiny bit on the hard side. Not that I favour skin-smoothing, which can be done to a ridiculous extreme, but perhaps just a touch less of what you used. The dark tones make this look like it could have been taken at a funeral, with the downcast eyes of the child, as noted by some commenters. If it were a pic from a wedding I'd expect to see some colour and lighter tones.
The juxtaposition for such obvious age and youth may also work against you, though, as the current batch of voters don't seem to care for images that reflect the realities of life like age and wrinkles. I like the composition, but there is a sombreness to the mood that some may find tough to swallow.
Hope this helps, feel free to pm me with any questions.
Susan |
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| 01/25/2017 06:48:34 PM |
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| 01/24/2017 07:05:15 PM |
Mechanical Clockby ladpupmoeComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a very nicely done that meets the challenge, a pleasing shot of the innards of a mechanical clock with all the inner cogs and wheels exposed. Love the complementary colours, the play of light off of the machinery in foreground and mid ground especially. The background bits just don't show up quite so well, though, and the loss of detail means that the eye is looking for something more - and then it goes to the odd back-right area of the shot where there is an unexplained light wash on the blue, whereas on the other side of the pic everything is dark. It just throws the viewer off a bit.
Something else that isn't quite working in your favour is the portrait orientation. Generally it's best to go with a square crop or horizontal orientation, because if voters have to scroll down to see the whole image, the impact tends to get lost.
Hope this critique has been of help, feel free to pm me with any questions.
Susan
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| 01/22/2017 10:24:28 AM |
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| 01/20/2017 08:06:58 AM |
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| 01/18/2017 08:09:58 PM |
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