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| 05/25/2009 10:12:05 AM |
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| 05/24/2009 07:17:46 PM |
Gloomy Couchby michaelhfComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: 'Gee, looks like an opening shot for a scene from a SAW movie' - and another commenter saw the resemblance too.
Technical: Lighting is harsh and bleak, which works for this shot. Couch risks being lost in the midground; just barely below the dead centre of the shot.
Artistic: Bleak industrial setting, fluorescent lighting, exposed pipes all juxtapose nicely with the unloved love seat, sitting there awaiting its fate. The dingy colour of the couch blends in very well with the overall scene.
FWIW: I would have cropped out most of the foreground and pulled the couch further away from the wall on the left, to cast a longer shadow and give it a greater sense of isolation. All in all good work, keep shooting!
Feel free to PM me with any questions,
Susan |
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| 05/24/2009 07:06:54 PM |
In the Doghouseby CuttoothComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: a very good entry for this challenge. Shows furniture and more importantly there is a story here.
Technical: Great use of ambient lighting; dof good and composition is deceivingly simple but works very well. Like the filter you used, it seems to foreshadow a very long night ahead.
Artistic: The slant and rigidity of your body drives home a sense of discomfort. Love the tiny little blanket/shawl(?), it shows how you're having to make do with what you can scrounge while the wifey gets all the good stuff!
FWIW: Wouldn't change a thing. And you scored in the top 20 so good on you!
Feel free to PM me with any questions.
Susan
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| 05/23/2009 08:41:37 AM |
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| 05/20/2009 08:36:04 PM |
Lostby roby21112Comment: love the untold story here in the bloody handprints on her torso and the fright in her eyes...and the welts around her wrists...and the dog collar and leash, just saw that too! disturbingly well done. 9 |
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| 05/20/2009 08:34:27 PM |
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| 05/20/2009 08:27:46 PM |
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| 05/20/2009 08:26:10 PM |
Blonde Ambitionby kingskingdomComment: Lovely model, but the glimmery makeup and gratuitous boob shot make her look more trashy than glamourous. |
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| 05/20/2009 08:19:34 PM |
Color Crushby trnqltyComment: FINALLY! An interesting photo and model with great makeup, nudity implied but not gratuitous, great comp and lines. 9 |
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| 05/20/2009 08:12:45 PM |
On the prowlby just_meComment: great lighting, lovely makeup and model. However, the gratuitous breast shot says tarty, not glamourous. |
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