denouement
by tanguera

Comment:
well done

Making Waves
by Pixelstate

Comment:
wonderful gold to this

Take a Walk in the Forest
by illini75

Comment:
lovely pastel color and blur

unsettled
by flaherma

Comment:
I'm not a fan of this processing but I'm giving you a 7 because it works with this shot. Still, I think a more subtle application would be better.

Under the Umbrella, with Dove
by bjoern

Comment:
I like how there is only the suggestion of an umbrella, and only the suggestion of a painting.

It ain't me, babe
by ubique

Comment:
I'm devastated by your feebleness.

You can't go wrong when you fill an essay with fantastic photos, but I find it to be good as an essay as well. You say it's about tracks, and indeed it is a meditation on "tracks" and what that can mean. How we leave them behind and how they continue changing the place we leave.

20171024_164427-Bearbeitet
by primabarbara

Comment:
this is good. I want more of these. The cumulative effect is an illusion that the same structures build our entire world. The car photo is my favorite. funny that a car is the most rebellious form in the batch.

Also effective is when you change the scale. I would definitely continue doing that, putting photos of small structures next to photos of large structures.

Attitude
by mitalapo

Comment:
I loved you for your thought balloons. They paraded into your forehead like a sentence composed of colors. Every picnic almost floated away.

(pic so good it gets two comments!)

Message edited by author 2017-11-07 14:48:12.

Attitude
by mitalapo

Comment:
I loved you for your thought balloons. They paraded into your forehead like a sentence composed of colors. Every picnic almost floated away.

Which pair?
by mitalapo

Comment:
Sherbert sherbet sorbet,
pick your sobriquet.