I Can Only Imagine...
by talj

Comment:
Thanks for taking the time to look Karma, I really appreciate it. I have just downloaded the Casting Crowns song, thank you :o)

I agree, I am very picky about my shots and can find plenty of holes in the "technicals" of this image but you have hit the nail on the head, this is all about the emotional aspect :o)

I too wondered if Moses had stood where we were. Half way up the mountain there is a pool of water where it is said Moses spent time. It's a strange feeling to be somewhere like this and imagine who may have been before you.

Blue Graphite
by Ecce_Signum

Comment:
Greetings from the Criti....

Whoops! ;o) Hi Andi :o)

For what its worth here's my opinion on your pencils..

Nice choice of colours and the position of the pencils in the frame is good. I'd like to see what the shot looks like in 'landscape' format rather than portrait as for some reason I keep tilting my head to look at this! A good use of selective focus and the DOF helps with your attempt to make the subject 'abstract'. The lighting on the underside of the bottom pencil doesn't seem quite right to me and is a little distracting as it doesnt 'match' that of the topside.

Of course, all these things are just MHO ;o)

- T :o)

Train Tracks
by Loki

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Composition:

I definitely agree with your commenters with regards to the placement of the model in this shot. The models pose is good but to fit the challenge she would have looked better in the distance with the train track leading the viewer to her. I am also wondering what would have been behind her if you took the image the other way, as it is at the moment I find the background too busy and distracting.

Technicals:

Portraits are not an area I know very much about at all but I will do my best to offer some advice. First of all, to me, the lighting looks very dull. There is no real detail in the models face and the colours don't 'pop'. It was obviously not the brightest of days so that hasn't helped here. Also the background has a slight out of focus look (it could be my eyes!), I would like to either see a shallower depth of field or have the background completely in focus.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

Message edited by author 2006-10-03 07:10:12.

Sharp
by bbright

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Composition:

For me this is a nice abstract shot and the composition is good. However, I don't feel that the lines 'lead' the viewer to anything. In my opinion leading lines are something that grabs the viewers attention and pulls them in to the shot. Because of the choice of composition here, with being so close to the subject the viewer can't be lead into or around the image they are just hit straight between the eyes with the boat.

Technicals:

The lighting is a bit dull, more natural light on the day or a boost of the colours in PS may have helped this. It could be my eyes but the tire looks perfectly in focus whilst the boat itself looks a little soft. I also feel the shot could do with a little sharpening.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

going up
by Mark

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Composition:

I love the placement of the balloon in the frame, really draws the viewer to the great colours and lines. I may have been tempted to have the balloon completely filling the frame in the top right hand corner but other than that the lines from the bottom lead you right up to the tip of the balloon, I think this is spot on!

Technicals:

The light is nice in this shot, your exposure is great but I do agree with one of your commenters, this could possibly do with a little sharpening.

I am not sure that I can really do a lot of 'critiquing' here as I feel the shot is technically good and composition is very nice.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

Making Seed
by madcrabber

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Composition:

I like the position of the flower in the frame and you've got 'lucky' with the placement of the bee. I would like to have seen what this looked like with maybe 2/3rds flower 1/3rd background.

Technicals:

Brilliant use of natural light and the exposure is perfect. You have a nice 'bokeh' effect and good sharp focus on the flower.

My Personal Thought:

Going by the title I can sort of accept that this fits the challenge but, is it adhering to the spirit of the challenge? The 'seeds' at the centre are more like more petals waiting to open, unless it's a flower I haven't seen before. This maybe a reason why the shot didn't score a 6+.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

Devil's Claw
by lynnmarie

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Composition:

The first thing that strikes me about this image is the Devils Claws and seeds appear to just be floating and I find this very off putting. I do like how you have linked the two claws together and the few scattered seeds in the front help the overall idea.

Technicals:

Your commenters have pointed out the processing you have done on this shot is what has let you down. By turning the background to black you have lost detail and a natural look in the Devils Claw. As it is now the seeds in the front don't look in focus but I am not sure if this again is down to your processing, I would really like to see how sharp this image was before you did any editing. I can also see some editing marks around the top of the right hand claw.

My personal thought:

I think you would really benefit from purchasing some black material for your background, I have found mine extremely useful for still subjects like this. It would have mean't with this shot you would already have had your dark background and you wouldn't then have lost so much detail and the claws would have kept their natural look and colouring.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

The Next Generation
by SteveDunster

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Hi Steve

Here goes....

Composition:

The whole impression, to me, is of a busy image with no obvious place for the eye to settle. The pinecone should be the focal point but does not really stand out and it is too central in the frame

I think concentrating more on the cone by using portrait format rather than landscape would have been better but also taking a further look around where you were and trying to find a cone with much less going on around it would really have helped this shot.

Technicals:

As your comments have suggested the image is way over saturated and this is the biggest problem I feel you have and the reason for you sub 5 score. Most of the detail has been lost on the pinecone and the overall image has a very unnatural feel to it.

I would suggest that if time allowed you tried to return to the area when the light was better as this would have prevented you from having to try and make the colours 'pop'. Failing the opportunity to return, a tighter crop and much less saturation may have worked better.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

Macro Seed
by trailwalker

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Hi Dave,

First of all congratulations on your 2nd highest score and great work on your first try with the extension tubes!

Now down to the nitty gritty :o)

Composition:

I like your choice of background, it really makes the greens of the seed stand out. The mirroring of the first seed with the blurred background seed is a nice idea and both are placed nicely in the frame.

I think portrait format works well here to give the shot a feeling of depth that wouldn't be the same if you had shot this in landscape format

Technicals:

Excellent DOF with lovely detail in the first seed and enough blur on the background seed for the viewer to still know what it is but not be distracted by it. Your use of natural light gives the greens and purples on the seed a nice colour.The only thing I don't like is the slight burn out at the top of the seed.

It could be my eyes but I feel the image could do with a little sharpening to just bring out a bit more of the spikes on the first seed.

My personal thought:

This shot for me, although composed nicely, doesn't have the 'wow' factor of a ribbon winning image. But for your first attempt with the extension tubes you seem to be doing ok to me and I'd suggest sticking with it, you have the techincal abilities to produce some stunning images and I look forward to seeing them in the future.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

Gone to Seed
by mpreslar

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Hi Marty,

First of all congratulations on your highest scoring shot to date :o)

Composition:

I like the placement of the thistle to one side of the frame and the angle of the stem helps lead the viewer to the 'seeds'. I would agree with one of the comments below, the light patches in the background are a little distracting, particularly in the top left. Maybe getting a very slight higher angle and tilting the camera down a little would have enabled you to lose the white parts and just have the greens in the background?

I also think the thistle head on the right would look better if is was completely in the frame, as it is at the moment it leaves me wishing I could see the rest of it.

Technicals:

Excellent DOF, the blurred dark greens really help the white of the 'seeds' stand out. You have captured some lovely detail and textures in the stem and thistle heads but I do think it could do with being sharpened a little.

Hope this helps.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)