V8 Jetboat Championship Series
by Heavy

Comment:
Nice action shot. The colors seem a bit flat, perhaps a levels adjustment would brighten it up a bit?

Teen Magazine - Winter's Over!!! - Dance like Nobody is watching!
by troberge

Comment:
I picture this more in a newspaper as a quick snap of spring in the local park. Not sure that the title helps here.

Wham !!!!
by drake217

Comment:
Ouch! I find this one strange with the lack of people in the shot. I would think there would be someone around either looking, helping or cleaning up. I also can't figure out how these two vehicles got into this position. On the positive side though, it definately makes me want to read the article that hopefully accompanies the shot!

Youthful Art To Replace Graffiti
by BrianR

Comment:
Great shot of the graffiti, but I'd like to see the people who created the art too.

Teenager and Mother Rescued as smoke engulfs home
by train

Comment:
Good timing and good capture. Like how you can just see the house in the background. The person being carried looks like only a pair of feet.. wish you could see their head or more of their body on the left of the firefighter.

At dawn, we remembered
by KiwiShotz

Comment:
Main subject is a bit small for the frame for me. But a great capture of a solomn moment of remeberance that would work well to accompany an article.

Lest We Forget
by Kita

Comment:
Looks like lighting wasn't quite bright enough here for a hand held shot and it got a little blurry. Good shot for a plaque that may have just been put up, otherwise adding a person to the shot might help catch a person's eye and make them want to read the accompanying article.

The Power of Touch
by shphotography

Comment:
A neat shot, but I'm not sure that I can picture the accompanying article.

Flyin High
by climbin2thetop

Comment:
Neat shot that would definately pull me in to read a little bit more about it. I'm not sure if I can picture a shot like this in the newspaper with so much negative space and nothing to frame the bottom or give a sense of scale.

Calls for toughened glass to reduce smash-and-grab car crime
by Tallbloke

Comment:
The shot definately fits the headline you've given, but the shot alone wouldn't be enough to draw me in to read the article. Perhaps adding a person to the shot to show how they're feeling about the theft would be more effective?