My morning coffee
by mimid

Comment:
I like coffee, but that does not look appetising at all.

Aglow
by rsaulyte

Comment:
weirdd how it looks like a daisy...

Crossing
by lunix

Comment:
a little too much contrast for me.

Tickle Me Pink
by bowronfam3

Comment:
You're really not suppose to show your stuff in the forums before hand you know.

6:26 am
by cloverstar

Comment:
what in the world is with that border?

Hold on
by caba

Comment:
i like. perspective and thirds happiness. Lost a little dark detail on this monitor up in the left hand corner though.

Wonder
by dwolff

Comment:
Would have rated it higher, but you lost the detail in the upper left highlight on the baloon.

Half Way Down
by Jaimeson

Comment:
How did I know that one was yours?

Please Be Seated
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
Thanks for your comment's on my picture, I didn't think it was all that great, but certainly better than it's overall score turned out.

(this is written as a devil's advocate, hope you don't mind.)

I think this picture suffers from not enough subjust, or an unclear supject.

As I've (hopefully) been learning from the thirds challenge, I think placing the olive oil and condiments (which appears to my eyes as the subjest) larger and off center in thirds, with the other table settings leading off to the top/side/corner would have helped. This would bring your eyes to the detail on the bottle more, and help to lead you eye to it.

I also think this composition would work better with deepre DOF, with at least the next table in focus also.

Also, to be REALLY picky, the table needs to be cleaned. :0)

I've looked through some of you other stuff, and it show that you have a ton more potential than that which showed up in this picture. Keep at it.

Message edited by author 2005-09-21 14:58:33.

Violet
by elluls

Comment:
nice DOF,