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| 06/03/2006 11:41:04 PM |
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| 06/03/2006 10:18:02 PM |
Be The Angel Of My Religionby LongfistComment: I don't like the title but that's pretty much where my dislike ends. :P Really, great lighting. I also like the composition although a tighter crop may have been better. I also like the pose in general.
Speaking of the pose, there are two things I feel would have made this better. First, her right arm coming out of the darkness and dangling like that makes it look lifeless and doesn't do anything for the shot. So maybe just have her tuck that in. The other thing is her facial expression. It just doesn't look all that sexy to me while everything else about her does. However, it's not as big a deal here because this isn't a close up.
Anyway, that's it. Good luck. |
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| 06/03/2006 10:04:35 PM |
The lambby sdburbankComment: Changing the angle of the light source just a bit could have helped this greatly. There needs to be more light shining on the front to show more detail. |
| 06/03/2006 10:02:36 PM |
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| 06/03/2006 10:00:52 PM |
Othersideby sephick911Comment: Cool idea. One thing you may want to try is to show something on the other side via a shadow to raise the tension in this shot. Might not quite work in a still frame shot like this but I'm thinking like in a movie when a shadow suddenly appears. |
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| 06/03/2006 09:57:53 PM |
crown bloomby JuganComment: I like the choice in subject however, it's just too soft for me. Might I suggest either going with a smaller aperture to get more sharp or if the lens allows go with an extremely narrow DOF for artistic effect. What you used here is too "middle of the road" and thus doesn't carry the wow factor that either of my suggestions could provide. Also, there is a lot of color here but it's a bit dull. If you are limited with your post processing than try boosting up your saturation settings in camera. |
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| 06/03/2006 09:53:34 PM |
Bamboo & Lampby lifternessjtComment: I like the main subject and the color however I think this would have worked out better without the lamp in the shot. |
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| 06/03/2006 09:51:59 PM |
Scotchby spydrComment: I like the idea and the lighting generally looks good. However, I might try difusing the light some more so it's less harsh on the label at the bottom. |
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| 06/03/2006 09:50:07 PM |
Yellow Roseby tonyvComment: Very nice lighting. The yellow and green look a bit off to me probably due to the type of lighting you used or white balance. If that was intentional then just forget I just said that. :) Either way it gets a 7. |
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| 06/03/2006 09:45:29 PM |
unwilling modelby timfythetooComment: Good lighting. However, I would try a different crop. This one makes his head look too distorted. |
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