Timid
by elsapo

Comment:
Congrats. Maybe call him Mello? As in Mello Yello, I won a yellow ribbon with him. :P

Message edited by author 2006-09-08 00:37:37.

2006-08-25
by talmy

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First impression is this meets the challenge but little else. It's a nice scene in general but I feel too much care was made into trying to meet the challenge vs making a more appealing photo.

I like the composition especially how the hills create a leading line along with the fence. The fence post however, I don't particular care for.

As for improvements I would do something about that sky for starters. I assume there isn't anything you can do in photoshop but if there is some detail there I would try pulling out whatever is there. If not just be more aware of your skies before heading out for a shoot. Also, I'd try and avoid including fence posts. If it wasn't there and you had better sky and some more post processing this would have scored much higher, IMO.

Reach For The Sky Outtake
by hotpasta

Comment:
We need to have another from the ground up challenge! I enjoyed shooting for this challenge and from the looks of it so did you. Another cool outtake. The diagonal composition works really well especially for this odd shaped building.

Reach For The Sky Outtake RED
by hotpasta

Comment:
I think you made the right choice in terms of the highest possible score but that aside I like these variations. It would make an interesting pop-art like arrangement if you hung them on a wall together.

Buddy Franklin Flies
by hotpasta

Comment:
I love the colors. So crisp and clean too. The background is also really good as it doesn't distract. The pole isn't great but it's so far off to the right it doesn't bother me.

Silence
by Arti-Elvi

Comment:
Weird so it must be muts.

She
by LalliSig

Comment:
Larus always has the best models. Congrats on another ribbon. 10!

The Bean Stalker
by RossF

Comment:
Love the lighting.

Protector of the Pastels
by ShutterPug

Comment:
Excellent pet portrait!

Rachel & Riley
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
I looks good to me. Would be better if you had godzilla lurking in the background. :P