Angel
by heida

Comment:
Congratulations again. You have achieved a very own distinct style, which really separates you from the rest. Amazing work.

Kodak EasyShare DX6340
by BooZon

Comment:
I like the idea of the lens moving. Nice crisp and clear as well, emphasising high-tech. Cord should not have touched the border and top left turns yellow which looks a bit dirty, like a smudge.

peachy keen
by coolhar

Comment:
The ice cream should have been in focus to make it appealing. Now the focus is on the packaging and I would not buy a product for its packaging.

EAU de TOILLET
by drz01

Comment:
You have a nice bottle there with a great color eau de toilette, but it could have been made so much more appealing. first make sure the bottle is clean, spotless. Then play with the light, not just from the front. translucent would be great here. And a matching or contrasting attractive colored background. Would all give a very different result. Suggest you try, even though it is too late for the challenge, it is very rewarding.

Seagulls
by drjeggle

Comment:
and the product your are advertising for is ? it is not clear from the image and therefore I do not consider this an advertisement.

Style... Timeless
by johnm

Comment:
I like it how you tried to add the blue accents, but then would have liked to see it more around on all digits. The middle of the clock face shows some irregularities, if that is dirt then it should have been cleaned first. Nice background, matching the leather and gold.

Luscious, Lite and Dreamy! Get Reddi...Reddi Wip Topping!
by charmayne

Comment:
the cake is already quite a busy composition, and then add the table cloth, it becomes a bit too much. Just a few (or even one) strawberry with cream would have been enough for me.

Tools for winning photography . . . I hope
by phraid2002

Comment:
I can see your identity in the top right corner, should have logged out first. Composition has too many elements for me, looses appeal.

An offer you can't refuse
by supermax

Comment:
The exposure is so bad that the product no longer appeals to me.

Go To Work On A Strawberry
by BobsterLobster

Comment:
What a shame you did not have a more perfect specimen. Very appealing image otherwise with a clear concentrated message.