CAL-EH-FORN-YA
by bryanbrazil

Comment:
6 - Good, but like to see more definition and color in the fore foliage/frame - not sure how, perhaps fill flash, coupled with some tweaking pp.

Uniqua
by nycpawnpusher

Comment:
2 - Further back to incorporate more of the frame and the frame in better focus, make this better in my opinion - although the subject matter within frame doesn't hold my attention.

Duplicity
by redeemer

Comment:
6 - Quite well done. Just the overexposure on the left, which you're likely well aware. Perhaps b&w/toning may have helped workaround that here. Good 'different' concept of framing.

Soccer Ball
by ericbar

Comment:
2 - Possibly good potential, even using the oof fore framing. Bigger (640 width) and a more balanced compostion/crop likely helped.

Our Sun
by bcoble

Comment:
2 - Nice scene/shot - not framed strongly enough for this Challenge in my opinion. Maybe a tighter crop, who knows.

Remeber that walk ...
by vikas

Comment:
6 - Nice. Difficult, but the dof even closer as well, may have made this even better, but would likely have diminished the illusion of the framing at the bottom. Not sure, but perhaps a more finely tuned crop at the top, making a more horizontal framing. More at the bottom (even if oof), possibly as well. Selective desat may have given this extra as well, who knows - nice scene/candid as is, in my opinion. +m in your title.

Trianguleye
by behindthescenes

Comment:
4 - Good potential. Difficult, as I like the oof/bokeh effect in the triangles, however at least part of that 'frame' in sharper focus, a more finely tuned crop and composition and attention paid to finer details such as skin/make up, make this better in my opinion. Overall perhaps further back, incorporating more of the 'triangle(s)' and a slight shift in focus (especially so the skin(?) top left is not so apparent), also help this, in my opinion. edit:typo

Message edited by author 2006-06-21 07:57:30.

Half Dome
by steffyld

Comment:
3 - Difficult, but more definition and light in the 'frame' and perhaps overall the colors tweaked for added depth and drama, make this better in my opinion. Depending what was there, more 'frame' incorporated bottom/bottom left as well.

The wonky bridge entrance
by Wobble

Comment:
3 - Despite your title, still think this needs a fairly good rotate up on the left. A more finely tuned crop to 'use' the frame more, also would have helped.

Princess in the Castle
by ZILA

Comment:
3 - Like to see the frame in better focus, and perhaps more of it incorporated for added balance compositionally. A slight nudge rotation up on the right, perhaps a variation in angle, for added 'effect' and a little further back, make this better in my opinion.