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A Royal Korean Dish - Goo Jeol Pan
01/11/2006 08:55:32 AM
A Royal Korean Dish - Goo Jeol Pan
by pa_cuthbert

Comment:
Beautifully arranged food - the photo itself is laking in detail and punch. Taking the photo from above the center might have helped the composition-fully symetrical. The on camera flash is very harsh leaving the food flat and dark shadows at each plate. Light it with several lights around the food and off the camera.
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Indian Grainery
01/08/2006 12:34:40 AM
Indian Grainery
by PhantomEWO

Comment:
This looks like something out of a sci-fi movie. I love the honeycomb effect on the overhang. You've done a wonderful job of capturing the color and textures without losing detail in the shadow. Don, very nice.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Check-ered
01/04/2006 01:59:41 AM
Check-ered
by shaver

Comment:
Shaver, your strengths are the interesting set-up, and the unique view point. You've got some technical elements that kept it from scoring higher. As mentioned in one of the comments, the focus is a bit fuzzy, instead of being tack sharp. Looking at your comments, you should be able to have a strong focus throughout the image with an F16 aperture. The problem may have been in the order of steps. You are wisest to sharpen AFTER you have resized.

Another problem may have been in your tonal range. The image comes across as heavily black and grey. The whites seem rather muddy. I can't help with the fix-it there, since I have the same problem myself.

The composition falls with the drop-off of the board on the sides and the strange reflections above the round edge of the mirror. You'll want to make sure that all of the image is exciting to look at.

There are many strengths to this image. I've concentrated on what may not have worked here, since that was your request. You've definitely got a great start here. You've got many who were very taken with the image. 24 votes or 8 or higher is a nice showing. Work on the technicals and keep the creativity coming.

Becky
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Necromancy
12/15/2005 08:51:40 PM
Necromancy
by labuds

Comment:
While I personally don't like the subject matter, the image is very well done. The DOF works well, as does the candle light glow.
Five Candles in a Box
12/15/2005 08:50:17 PM
Five Candles in a Box
by phylsy7

Comment:
I would love to see this cropped so the box is on the lower third line instead of so near the center. Well exposed.
Radiant Reminiscence
12/15/2005 08:48:17 PM
Radiant Reminiscence
by RKT

Comment:
I like the lantern patterns on the wall.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Nostalgic Studio Lights
12/15/2005 08:47:52 PM
Nostalgic Studio Lights
by gr8dane

Comment:
Either the figures are tiny or the flames are huge. I look forward to seeing this later and finding out which.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Candlelight
12/15/2005 08:45:28 PM
Candlelight
by Gaupi

Comment:
The concept is charming and well composed. The technical quality of the image is very poor and keeps this from being much higher. My first thought was a 1 or 2, but the charm of the piece brings it up to a 4. View the tutorials to receive help on sizing and preparing for challenges. Good luck in the future.
Too early to tell
12/12/2005 11:32:53 PM
Too early to tell
by Dirtypainter

Comment:
The concept is great. The quality of the image is not as great. Match the technical aspects of the image to the idea.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Copper Fields
12/09/2005 04:29:56 PM
Copper Fields
by Nald

Comment:
Awesome, Steve. This is wonderful. I saw someone out on a hill near 5600 W. and 2100 S. shooting into the industrial section during the challenge week. I was hoping for a top shot from a local. You came through with flying colors.
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