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| 08/18/2005 02:24:11 PM |
The Jugglerby MPRPROComment: ** Greetings from the Critique Club **
Technical: Focus seems a bit soft on the edges of glass sphere and on wood holder. Very good bokeh. Nice color saturation.
Composition: Glass ball seems too far away, and would be better a little more off centered. Poosibly rotating image slightly ccw would make this more interesting. Due to the sphere being so far away, it is hard to see a clear image inside the glass. Seems a bit busy in the glass ball. Try waiting until not so many people are present, and have a more interesting subject in their place.
Meeting the Challenge: I feel you did this well as it presents the viewer with an optical illusion.
Linda
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| 08/18/2005 02:13:01 PM |
At the heart of it all...by fotodudeComment: ** Greetings from the critique club **
The first thing that stikes me is too juch dead space, particularly along the bottom third of the image.
The second thing is the 'double-exposure effect' - just looks off balanced. The I realized why....the hand is more visible than the upside down head, so at first you notice the hand which would not be in the ocrrect anatomiacal presentation to be shooting a camer. After really searching the image, you notice the head under the camera..
The wrinkles in the shirt are a bit distracting also.
Colors are nice - bright blue on black. And the color of the cap is perfect as it does not over-power the face, but accentuates it. I like the lighting and shadows.
Over all, while this was nto a favorite shot of mine, it was very creative and executed fairly well.
- Linda
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| 08/17/2005 09:35:29 PM |
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| 08/17/2005 09:34:14 PM |
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| 08/17/2005 09:30:43 PM |
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| 08/17/2005 09:24:03 PM |
- -by ralphComment: blurred flowers across top are distracting. Good shutter speed |
| 08/17/2005 09:22:45 PM |
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| 08/17/2005 12:27:24 AM |
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| 08/17/2005 12:25:00 AM |
Acousticby hblakeComment: you really need to check spelling before submitting |
| 08/17/2005 12:07:23 AM |
Grande Finaléby GeneralEComment: I cannot resist...relaizing you MUST be going for the brown - I'm giving this a 10 |
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