Haleluja!
by Bolti

Comment:
I like this one, but I would like to have seen a little tighter crop. Perhaps pulling about 1/5th off the right and 1/10th off the bottom, thus getting the fram closer to the lower left corner. Nice toning and crisp focus, and nice exposure overall with all the various elements.

Separated
by dolphnz8

Comment:
Really nice toning treatment and composition. I think that I might have tried shooting throught he window on her left as the bell and white structure in the foreground are distracting. Very well done with the selective BW, though.

Window of Knowledge
by Tajhad

Comment:
While not a bad idea, I thnk this one is more window-lit than window framed. I like his expression and the grainy feel to the image. I'd like to see the rest of that left foot, as chopping it off leads the viewer's eyes right out of the frame.

daydream
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
This one has the WOW factor. Excellent composition and image tone that produces a longing mood. The top left corner is blown out and a little distracting, but that's about the only criticism. Great capture.

beautiful day
by Jaded_Housewife

Comment:
The grame in this window is overbearing and really steals from the composition. Nice lighting, exposure and crisp focus, but perhaps a different window would have been nicer.

In from the rain.
by mysticred

Comment:
I like the angled composition and the warm tone this capture has. I might have straightened it about a degree and a hlf clockwise, but that would be about it. Nice capture.

Rainy Day
by phylsy7

Comment:
The toning and subject in this one sets a terrific, rainy-type mood. I think that the large pain is a bit disctracting, and shifting your position to the left a bit would have improve the composition. Perhaps cropping the single pane where the 4 psople are standing.

old.jpg
by ericwoo

Comment:
It surprised me, too. Hopefully better in the next one.

New life budding
by Kelli

Comment:
I thnk that Dr Achoo hit the nail on the head. While I ma not a stickler for the "rules" of photography, the rule of thirds would serve this shot well. The lighting is somewhat harsh, and using some fill flash and a quicker shutter speed might help to isolate your subject from that busy background. It does seem over-saturated, but I am not sure that the red dots aren't there anyway. Overall, not bad, but still room for improvement.

A New Castle Awaits the Coming Tide
by chalice

Comment:
This is very nicely composed, the exposure is nailed and the focus is crisp. However, I think that the color really takes away from this capture. Forgive me, but I wanted to take a look at it with SEPIA TONING, and I think that the treatment serves it well. The color work in your portfolio is spectacular! I just think this one works a little better tined.