Palm tree
by erainman

Comment:
Really very under exposed, which made the image muddy. Also there is not a strong enough motion pan to create speed.

Space & Time
by hokie

Comment:
Blur, an abstract doesn't make, as I have discovered.

Gold
by manic35

Comment:
Nice tones on this one. I love the yellow gold. Your capture of the pattern of dots was also quite good. The interest factor was what was lacking for me in this one. Well executed, technically correct, but I found it did not hold my interest.

The Wanderer
by Kivet

Comment:
I think the subject does not lend itself well to abstract. It is too defined and recognizable.

The little-known CANDY side of the moon.
by Pixlmaker

Comment:
Needs more saturation.

Kryptonite
by fas917

Comment:
The composition seems too loosely executed. Cropping out more of the left side to focus the eye on the play of tones and patterns on the right would have made a stronger image.

Kodak Moments
by nemesise1977

Comment:
Very well executed. Your focus is really clear and your exposure is also very good. Overall, the composition seemed lacking. There are two subjects of interest, the screw hole on the left and the tilted L on the right. Perhaps a better crop to get rid of one of the elements would have made a better abstract. I would say to crop out the left part of the image, and increase the amount of the right of the image to show more of the lines.

For J
by bobdaveant

Comment:
Didn't think the subject created a great abstract. The soft focus on the right takes away from the entire image.

Tunnel Vision
by Man_Called_Horse

Comment:
Very precise and clear. You did a wonderful composition with the rays coming from the center square.

Scarred Heart
by shudderbug

Comment:
Needed more interest factor to add pow to the image.