Miniature Station - With Lights!
by levyj413

Comment:
Hello from the Critique Club!

My first impression upon looking at this image was a great one! The colors and the lights really stand out and all of the architectural lines really draw the eye through the entire scene. I also loved the miniaturized look of the shot. After reading your photographer's notes, here are my thoughts.

Upon first glance, the effect used for this shot is well done. The viewer certainly almost instantly thinks of a miniature scene, so kudos on that! After looking for a few more minutes, I started to notice some of the difficulties you commented on as well. All in all, I don't think that they really hurt the shot, but the walls on either side are certainly an obstacle when using this effect. In particular, there is a section in the upper left hand corner that should perhaps be more blurred...it tends to draw my eye away from the central part of the scene. However, the unblurred section on the right doesn't bother me...in fact, I feel like it gives me a nice anchor and compliments the walking figures.

It's a great shot and I think that the top 20 finish here certainly reflects that! I think you've really got the hang of this technique!!

Dear Santa, I know I've been naughty, but I don't deserve THIS !
by naomik

Comment:
:-) No one deserves that!

I didn't want a puppy.......he chews EVERYTHING
by Stagolee

Comment:
Oh but what a cutie he is!!

His Head Is All Stuffed With Fluff
by freakin_hilarious

Comment:
I like the tight composition a lot here, and I think this photo would jump from good to great with a little more focus on the bear's nose. I love the clarity you've caught in the fur on his head, and I think I'd like to see that extended all the way through. Love the lighting and the contrast between his yellow fur and the dark backdrop.

Dust Mop Slippers - Already in the Trash
by laser

Comment:
Wow, what a gift! :-) All that stuff in the trash makes the photo a bit busy.

The Perfect Present For The Man Who Always Wears Suede Shoes
by Sammie

Comment:
Nice set-up and composition here. The front of the shoes are a bit out of focus, and I find the toes on the left to be a bit distracting. But I really love the Christmas decorations in the background.

Pluto's Unhappy Christmas
by SeniorChief

Comment:
I think I might prefer to see this in color. Great clarity on the dog's fur!

One Year Sober
by tacshrp

Comment:
The focus is really clear and crisp on the top of the flask, but seems to soften a bit on the left hand side.

I am too young to cook.....
by hotroll

Comment:
Great expression on the girl's face here, but I'd really like to see a bit more light.

Oh, to be aged 7-12 again.
by McJamweasel

Comment:
Great focus on the little guy up front :-) I think a different choice in backdrop would really make the action figures stand out.