Walking The Line
by nameremoved1

Comment:
Some fill flash would have been good. I reall ylike the composition on this (camera way down on the rail).

Framed
by idnic

Comment:
Very cool.

I don't know why, but I was looking for a goldfish in the vase. LOL

SP Apr 13
by Mr_Pants

Comment:
This is disturbing on soooo many levels. I LOVE IT!!!!

pink-1.jpg
by tjmueller

Comment:
Very nice looking model, but I think she's arching her back too much. A reflector would be nice to soften the shadows a bit.

Day Five
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
Very cool. I'm guessing that you took two shots and combined them later or do you normally carry around a massive hard drive. *grin*

Enchanting Moments
by Akchas

Comment:
I'm not sure if you were trying for a soft focus or not, but I'm not sure it works with how dark this is. However, your model is very atractive.

I do have a couple of observations her panty strap is twisted. You might want to clone out the shadow of the light in the lower left. You also might want to consider getting the background to be just the fabric and not include the wall. The dark item she is kneeling on is also a distraction. Along with the seem by the light shadow. Her shirt is bunched up, that works, but she's got her skin right below it on her side and back bunched up as well, it doesn't look very complimentary.

I don't want to sound too negative, I jsut see a lot of potential with this.

DSC_2343bB&W.jpg
by carisakD70

Comment:
I love this closer crop.

why i love my lens hood
by Skip

Comment:
Cool. What's it look like now?

Vibrant
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
I love this shot, the only distracting thing for me is what appears to be pool hair (the slightly green tinge due to chlorine).

Sunshine
by Wayne1492

Comment:
This appears to be out of focus.