Untitled
by Michael_Boyet

Comment:
I like how you left just a hint of color in this and kept her green eyes available. Chickened out on a title, eh? :-)

summer sun
by oche

Comment:
Pretty girl. With a little better focus on the eyes and a larger image overall (you used 444 pixels when you had 720 available), you may have been onto something here.

Karen.
by brittanyvictoriaa

Comment:
Karen seems like an eager model. Why not get her in a more comfortable pose and a more photogenic environment? Even a slightly different POV here would work if you had nowhere else to go. A move to the left might have gotten rid of the piece of building peeking into the upper left. The partial tree needs to go as well. Just some observations. Good luck.

excuseme
by chuster

Comment:
What, was the shutter too loud? :-)

Posh girl with radio
by Belyst

Comment:
Too much emphasis and lighting on her hands and the radio. Those need to be de-emphasized and more put on her lovely face. The hat/feather combo was a good choice, just need to see more of it.

Bell'aria
by idnic

Comment:
Very classical feel to this. Nice job in post. Sexy enough but not over the top. Maybe a bit too dark around her eye (looks bruised almost). Overall, nicely done. Good luck.

The Necklace
by lovethelight

Comment:
This is nice overall, however it feels like the necklace is stealing the show. It's the most prominent part of the image and has the prime focal point. Beautiful model. Don't make her secondary.

Return
by Cutter

Comment:
I lke most of this. The outfit is nice (except that she appears to have a bandaged finger). The lighting is certainly dramatic and has potential. Some backlighting on her face is needed IMO (reflector to bounce back would be ideal). Would like to also see more of her face, rather than the extreme turned away angle. And WHAT is that black rectangle in front of her?

A winning smile
by mkothare

Comment:
Did you know this photo is only 42kb? You have 200 for advanced editing. If this wasn't all pixelated it could stand a chance of doing well. Looks like a nice photo, just can't really see it. :-/

Reflect
by Motek

Comment:
A unique photo. Not getting the glamour connection, especially considering that the face has melted into the water (which feels a bit bizarre). Could be slightly underexposed also.